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andsomethingelse — lessthanthree
Published: 2006-11-03 11:38:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 510; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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your heart will eat my heartand we will fall into simply
knowing
each other,
and stagger
carefully
together,
to break the paths we set
for ourselves
and lie together.
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Comments: 6
I love how many things this says with only thirty words. 26 if you don't count repeated words.
This tells the same story in many different ways, with many different conclusions and intents.
It's every bit as wonderful as every other piece of yours I've ever seen.
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thank you, you wonderful person. this was one of the easiest things i've ever written. you know how sometimes the words just fall out, and you don't even have to think about it?
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This is one of those poems that I love more and more each time I read it.
Because I see more in it, and it starts to mean more to me.
The diction is just beyond incredible.
The way it's written, how everything is structured, it just gets into my brain and doesn't go away.
Out of boredom, I compiled a whole stack of "the best of the best" from my favorites. And I think the MAJORITY (by technical mathematical terms) belongs to you.
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And i am, of course, truly honoured.
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Subtle, sweet, yet gutting still... Very lovely.
Well done!
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