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Published: 2009-04-28 17:47:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 104; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Here is a quick preview of another idea I've been trying to hash out. This started out as a terminator fanart but lately I've been trying to be more original so I started doing my own thing with it. It's part of a story I still haven't gotten put together yet, but its starting to make sense.
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Comments: 14

Rocketdog57 [2009-05-05 19:21:45 +0000 UTC]

That's one scary looking soldier of the future. You could just imagine him in the Terminator, or that kind of setting. Excellent concept. And yep, would love to read the story behind the inspiration.

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to Rocketdog57 [2009-05-06 09:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Ooot! I still haven't written anything down but it's starting to sound interesting in my head atleast. I'm going a totally different direction then terminator though, its still a futuristic war, and the machines will be winning, but it won't be just to destroy mankind or save the planet. I'm so tempted to give away my big plot twist it's hard to not resist spilling it all in a comment, but you need something to look forward to.

I just got a glaring plot hole that's keeping me from putting pen to paper on this.

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xSaria [2009-04-28 22:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I love the mask, looks really sinister.

And Storrryy?

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to xSaria [2009-04-28 23:30:34 +0000 UTC]

I did most the detail on the mask, the rest will hopefully look just as cool when I'm done.

Ooot! Well its not written yet, still in jumbled idea format, but basically its another human vs robot future but with comparisons to today's racism and extremism. I wanted the main character to be a Muslim survivalist with an almost suicidal hatred for the techs who abandons his own people when they start using machine parts to repair injured soldiers.

If you wanna hear more I'll spill, to be honest there isn't much more to it though.

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xSaria In reply to Anonymous-Ape [2009-04-28 23:51:06 +0000 UTC]

YOU HAD ME AT MUSLIM SURVIVALIST. Oh man, that's awesome. I just have to say that. There needs to be more Muslim characters.

I'll totally listen to the spill.

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to xSaria [2009-04-29 00:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I loved that idea about it too. Thanks! I guess I'll definitely have to finish it then.

Well I'm really short on time, so I'll just add that he finds a child in the middle of his search for death, and he desperately try's to get her back to his people, until about halfway home he discovers she's a robot. DUN DUN DUN! after that its a blank. And his arm might be robotic, not sure yet.

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xSaria In reply to Anonymous-Ape [2009-04-29 02:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesome... ! I can't wait until it's done. And hmm... robotic arm? Could go either way, but I'm not sure how traditional you want to go with his beliefs, though.

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to xSaria [2009-04-29 11:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I know, and it also has the obvious I-Robot connections, but logically you need something to fight a cyborg who's 10x stronger then you without resources or support. Also I wanted it to be partly why he leaves his soldiers behind, in a fit of rage he used his new arm to punch the medic and accidentally explodes his head. He just blinks for a few moments, say's a prayer and begins walking out of the compound, with half the people following wanting to go because he trained most of them, but he sprints off into the scraplands(which is going to take place somewhere near what is left of Jerusalem I think).

You got me all brainstorming again! I got this hole other idea forming about who the techs really are and what they are trying to do. It will help explain why he doesn't just kill her, and why she continues to act like an innocent child, not a cold hearted metal killer. Bah! If I give away too much I'll ruins it, but its just starting to sound good so I'm torn!

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xSaria In reply to Anonymous-Ape [2009-05-01 02:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes ideas are like blackholes, when you start to tell them you just can't stop! xD

Sounds awesome! I can't wait to see the rest.

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Jetstreak [2009-04-28 21:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I love how you shaded the armor, and the cracked ape skull is a nice effect

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to Jetstreak [2009-04-28 22:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! He's going to be the antagonist for my story, just have to find a logical reason for him to look ape .

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Jetstreak In reply to Anonymous-Ape [2009-04-28 23:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Story? If this picture has a backstory I'd love to read it

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Anonymous-Ape In reply to Jetstreak [2009-04-29 13:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for taking so long to reply, all of a sudden I got popular . I'm still working out the details but hopefully I'll have something to post with my next update.

A brief synopsis of it though is its a similar story to terminator, in that its a future war between humans and machines. But I want to take a totally different standpoint on the motivations of the machines, and who they really are, and how a small child's innocence effects the extremism of the main character and his dedication to killing every tech he meets.

So that's it in a nutshell, any thoughts?

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Jetstreak In reply to Anonymous-Ape [2009-04-29 13:32:29 +0000 UTC]

It sounds interesting Most robot vs. human stories always take the side and perspective of the human. Even Transformers did. The idea of a story behind the robots' perspective sounds awesome. Can't wait to read the story

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