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Antarija β€” The Untold - part 38

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Published: 2016-04-05 23:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 8935; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 15
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Description This part took far too long to make than I thought... I have enough. I wanna sleep... So in short- Zzzzzzzzzz.....


-* Pokemon can useΒ  only mana coming from natural rifts and their surroundings. They can't use the energy stored in enchanted crystals, Guardian Crystals or from places like the one Lenora mentioned.Β  Ecology, yo.
- Some of Team Plasma's guy might be dead...
- that strange monument is just a memento of the battle. It looked too plain so I've added some writings. They have no meaning, in case you wondered
- Burgh thinks he can be a dark character too, pffff
- No, Khail didn't try to burn down the whole forest.
- I'm too lazy to draw backgrounds so viva la copy/paste \(-w-)/



First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous ->fav.me/d9w1gby
Next -> fav.me/da0c2zl

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Comments: 49

Jenniej92 [2016-05-15 15:22:26 +0000 UTC]

those backgrounds are gorgeous *w*
love all the expressions here too! well done!

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Antarija In reply to Jenniej92 [2016-05-17 19:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm trying to get better at them so it means a lot! ;D

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ROJOyNARANJA [2016-04-24 22:43:08 +0000 UTC]

WHAT'S THAT HIT MARK THAT BURGH HAS ON HIS FACE?

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Velink [2016-04-10 12:37:29 +0000 UTC]

FInally caught up with you and damn!! youa re pretty fast
You are almost in same part of story as my comic
eventho I started earlier than you

doesn't matter tho, looking forward for more, Antarija

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Antarija In reply to Velink [2016-04-11 17:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha, welcome then! : D
Thanks, just trying to keep to the schedule. It's still gonna take few more years to finish...

Hope you'll enjoy your stay ;]

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Astr0nautical [2016-04-06 23:40:25 +0000 UTC]

How the frick do you get these done so quickly. And so well?

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Antarija In reply to Astr0nautical [2016-04-08 22:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha... That, well...
No life is to blame...
Haha...ha... QvQ

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Gecko-Comics [2016-04-06 17:41:15 +0000 UTC]

dun dun DUNNNN

The dragon thing is a super cool idea. Nice

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Antarija In reply to Gecko-Comics [2016-04-08 22:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I really wanted this whole skull incident to make some sense, so I'm really glad you like it! ^^

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LamentedGuide [2016-04-06 14:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Hm... I guess Team Plasma was trying to use the Dragonite skull to find Reshiram/Zekrom? Didn't get too far with that idea~

Have you ever played the Dragon Age series? All this talk of rifts, other dimensions, magic, and demonic/corrupted Pokemon reminds a lot about the game's own lore.

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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-04-08 22:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Yup!
I wanted to give some sense to the whole "we'll steal your skull and run to the forest, because it's an awesome plan" -thing.

Yeah, I've played all of them. But to be honest, I don't really see much in common between those and my story. Maybe the sole idea of naming mine rifts as Rifts... But well, maybe it's just an author's point of few : P
I'm not a big fan of the DA Inquisition btw. I loved first DA for awesome characters and to be honest with every new game they became more and more boring and plain... Sob

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LamentedGuide In reply to Antarija [2016-04-08 23:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Really? The way your Pokemon work reminds me of the spirits and demons of the Fade in DA. But I suppose the fantasy setting also made me think of it XD

That's ok, I'm not the biggest fan of Inquisition either, although I'm heads over heels over the first one. Honestly, aside from Origins, I haven't found very many RPGs with as intriguing a story as that game. It's a shame the sequels stunk, if only they didn't throw away the whole Grey Warden/Darkspawn plot

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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-04-09 12:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Really? Hm.
Hmmmmm. every fantasy looks the same xD

Exactly. Origins were the first game I've played more than once time after time even though I knew the story already. It was so good...
But it often ends like that. Same goes for Assassin's Creed. First 2-3 games were really good, and then UbisoftΒ  probably forgot what they even wanted to do and just threw new games at us to get some money... A pity.

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LamentedGuide In reply to Antarija [2016-04-09 13:37:58 +0000 UTC]

I know, right? It's like the developers ask themselves "hm, what was it about our games that players liked so much? The story, characters, and choices? Nah, let's just update the gameplay, make it prettier, slap in some bland characters, make your decisions meaningless, get drunk while we write the plot, and stick ya in a new location. What could go wrong?"

Oh yeah, don't forget the dlc that costs an arm and a leg just to finish the story XD

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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-04-11 16:08:18 +0000 UTC]

It's a shame when a memory of a good game is ruined by it's own continaution... :[

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Halolux [2016-04-06 06:52:32 +0000 UTC]

I hope Khail burns those nasty bugs to bits in the next gym battle.

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Antarija In reply to Halolux [2016-04-08 22:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Only bugs~? ;3

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Halolux In reply to Antarija [2016-04-09 00:31:42 +0000 UTC]

all dem bugs.

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Mutant-Girl013 In reply to Halolux [2016-04-06 07:54:03 +0000 UTC]

XD Burn them to hell XDΒ 

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Halolux In reply to Mutant-Girl013 [2016-04-09 00:31:48 +0000 UTC]

XD

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TheFourthSword [2016-04-06 05:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Well rip Plasma grunts
Look forward to seeing Khail kick Burgh his ass!

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Antarija In reply to TheFourthSword [2016-04-08 22:07:29 +0000 UTC]

No one likes poor Burgh (or at least his ass) xD

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Mutant-Girl013 In reply to TheFourthSword [2016-04-06 07:53:51 +0000 UTC]

XD Bench of Plasma grunts must be comfyΒ 

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TheFourthSword In reply to Mutant-Girl013 [2016-04-06 12:38:43 +0000 UTC]

I can still feel the warmth leaving their bodies

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Mutant-Girl013 In reply to TheFourthSword [2016-04-06 13:58:53 +0000 UTC]

whahahahah XD thats what makes it extra comfy XDΒ 

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DrillBoysGirl [2016-04-06 04:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Burgh...Burgh...He has a Fire Type. Even in Challenge Mode, you ain't a Challenge.


Seriously though, never had trouble with Burgh, the Triplets, or Elesa. Lenora and Clay on the other hand! Good Lord! Skyla, Bricen, and Drayden were iffy, depending on what was going on.


But Burgh, I don't foreseen any trouble.

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Antarija In reply to DrillBoysGirl [2016-04-08 22:06:53 +0000 UTC]

He still can have dreams!

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DrillBoysGirl In reply to Antarija [2016-04-09 17:42:13 +0000 UTC]

That's true, he can still dream.

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Grazyfish [2016-04-06 03:40:05 +0000 UTC]

I love the backgrounds in this chap!!!Β 

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Antarija In reply to Grazyfish [2016-04-08 22:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Grusnoid [2016-04-06 03:32:39 +0000 UTC]

That scene with the fire, all I could think of was this:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oo9buo…

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Antarija In reply to Grusnoid [2016-04-08 22:03:56 +0000 UTC]

xD

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RaineyJ [2016-04-06 01:34:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm definitely looking forward to the Burgh fight

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Antarija In reply to RaineyJ [2016-04-08 22:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Hope to make it better than in previous gyms =w=b

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BlazeGlory [2016-04-06 01:06:11 +0000 UTC]

Come on, we need some more tsun-tsun moments!!!

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Antarija In reply to BlazeGlory [2016-04-08 22:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Not on my watch.

Kidding No worries, with Saki on the board we'll have plenty of them~

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BlazeGlory In reply to Antarija [2016-04-08 22:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Good

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11JJ11 [2016-04-06 00:50:00 +0000 UTC]

A good fight? Good had too much focus on it. Is someone going to die?

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Antarija In reply to 11JJ11 [2016-04-08 22:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Why so negative~? I3

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11JJ11 In reply to Antarija [2016-04-08 22:03:44 +0000 UTC]

The word 'good' had too much emphasis on it! It has to have some meaning!
I don't want it to be foreshadowing of a death!

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Antarija In reply to 11JJ11 [2016-04-09 12:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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iacatyes2 [2016-04-06 00:44:27 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to think the sewaddle single-handedly defeat and tied up dear mister sage

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Antarija In reply to iacatyes2 [2016-04-08 22:00:23 +0000 UTC]

But of course~! Β 

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iacatyes2 In reply to Antarija [2016-04-08 22:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Clearly she is the MVP

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Tenshineko01 [2016-04-06 00:26:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a nice Update.

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Antarija In reply to Tenshineko01 [2016-04-08 21:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Tenshineko01 In reply to Antarija [2016-04-09 01:56:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Kat-Night [2016-04-06 00:07:08 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh..
I'm liking where this is going so far!~

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Antarija In reply to Kat-Night [2016-04-08 21:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~!

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