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Antarija — The Untold - part 40

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Published: 2016-05-17 00:46:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 8912; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 14
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Description Meet three happy crows~

And sorry for the walls of text again.

So, in case someone didn't notice, those three new guys are members of Raging Crows. Asahi and Gavil appeared in my last doodles, but thier design have changed a bit (I gave back an eye to Asahi, he looks better with it~)

But before you start calling Khail names I must remind you that they're all bandits and this is not a One Piece, where pirates are nice saviors and nakamas till the end of time. It's more brutal. And so, yes, they fight among themselves and kill each other at times, and they're jerks.

Info time:
- I like to make simple things complicated and so bandids groups are complicated as well. Basically there are one big group for every main area in Unova. Raging Crows for the area around the Striaton City, another one for Nacrene, another for Castelia, ect. ect. And they are kinda specialized. For example, Crows are for combat but in Castielia they're more like spies. I'll make a Lore about it as well, because this is something I've been building for a long time for this story. It may not even be that important for the plot, but I really like working on this kind of things. :>
-Normal people can't understand Pokemon, but somehow Asahi and Akashe are on the same wavelength.
- Asahi's name definitely wasn't inspired by some anime about volleyball... Not at all~
- Braviary is my fav Pokemon in this generation, so they just had to appear here. I'm a big fan of eagels, especially harpies, so I just fell in love with them...
- In next part we'll finally get out of the woods and reach Castelia!

And now, please excuse me, since it's 3 a.m I'm gonna do the flop.
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First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/da0c2zl
Next -> fav.me/daam0o2

Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
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Comments: 65

Antarija In reply to ??? [2022-07-13 19:28:27 +0000 UTC]

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ShiguKun [2019-03-07 22:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Asahi you kawai fuck

Damn I gotta go to sleep, I had hoped to catch up tonight but hey QAQ Guess I'm coming back tomorrow !

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Antarija In reply to ShiguKun [2019-03-27 01:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yes, he's a big-bear-bro type

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Kdarrell [2016-07-13 03:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Excited for more pages <3

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Antarija In reply to Kdarrell [2016-07-14 11:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha, working on it ;D

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Kdarrell In reply to Antarija [2016-07-17 11:02:39 +0000 UTC]

yesh

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shoto94 [2016-06-24 11:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Okay so I just discovered this story and decided to binge read it (not that something like that take long lol) and I must say I'm quite impressed...

You just earned yourself a new watcher/follower and Khail has earned a new fangirl...

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Antarija In reply to shoto94 [2016-06-26 07:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay, thank you so much!

Welcome on board then! Glad to have you with us~

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LamentedGuide [2016-05-20 02:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Are these bandits more like the bandits from Tangled, or is that just Asahi? Seriously, I knew I was gonna like this guy when he started crying like ten seconds after reuniting with Khail XD

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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-05-20 09:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Nope, it's just Asahi, and only for now, don't worry xD
I think he chose a wrong path in life, haha.

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LamentedGuide In reply to Antarija [2016-05-20 10:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol, what would he do if he wasn't a bandit? XD

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Antarija In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-05-23 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure, but I believe he would make a quite nice nursery ;D

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tembelizor In reply to Antarija [2016-06-05 10:34:23 +0000 UTC]

I kind of see him as a Baker xD

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Antarija In reply to tembelizor [2016-06-26 07:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that would suit him quite well xD

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Raycchan [2016-05-19 04:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I want Asahi to be in the story more. Just for his interactions with Akashe :'DĀ 
also, these bandits be hardcore

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Antarija In reply to Raycchan [2016-05-20 09:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, he'll stay with us at least for Castelia : P
Yay, people like bandits~

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XiwyCain [2016-05-18 20:21:20 +0000 UTC]

The gentle look of braviary! Yep, they are my fav too! Along with Zekrom.

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Antarija In reply to XiwyCain [2016-05-20 09:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah!

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ShadeOfObscurity [2016-05-18 14:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Asahi and Akashe are what we call "bros" even if they can't understand verbally they understand through the body language known as "posing"

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Antarija In reply to ShadeOfObscurity [2016-05-20 09:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Ā 

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PK-Bubbles [2016-05-18 05:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Man, sometimes it's hard to remember that this is a Pokemon comic ;D

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Antarija In reply to PK-Bubbles [2016-05-20 09:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, sometimes even I forget about it ; P

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AyaHatsuharu [2016-05-17 17:20:16 +0000 UTC]

HAIKYUUUU ASAHIIII !Ā  Ā 
Please, Anta-kun.. don't kill one of those three..Ā  Ā 
I really love them, right now.. They all are so funny.Ā  Ā 

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Antarija In reply to AyaHatsuharu [2016-05-17 20:24:56 +0000 UTC]



Killing them? Me? Naaaah-ahahaa, w-why would I even do that, my friend?

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AyaHatsuharu In reply to Antarija [2016-05-17 20:32:19 +0000 UTC]

YAAASSS, ASAHIIIII.Ā  Ā 
I dunno.. huh.. May.. maybe that I feel like.. you will..?Ā  Ā 
But if you won't.. huh.. sorry, huney, MY BAAAAD.. :runs away:Ā  Ā 

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Antarija In reply to AyaHatsuharu [2016-05-20 09:20:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm innocent, I swear~
For now...

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AyaHatsuharu In reply to Antarija [2016-05-20 19:28:47 +0000 UTC]

NAAAAAW. ;D;

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GoldenNocturna [2016-05-17 17:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Is it bad that I expected the bandits to act worse than how you've portrayed them? They're a pretty interesting crew for a bunch of jerks! And now we finally have an idea of Khail's goal in the story (although I'm sure it's going to get tangled up in a huge mess soon).

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Antarija In reply to GoldenNocturna [2016-05-17 20:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, those are just their happy moments, let them have some fun before burning down innocents ;]

Nothing can be too easy~

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GoldenNocturna In reply to Antarija [2016-05-19 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

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Hugo93F [2016-05-17 15:41:51 +0000 UTC]

So, real talk. Braviary is my favorite Flying type. Seeing it drawn in your style made me fall deeper in love with them. Thank you, i'd tip my fedora in your particular direction... But i wear no fedoras XD

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Antarija In reply to Hugo93F [2016-05-17 20:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! We, Braviary fans, shall unite!

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Velink [2016-05-17 14:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, new chars! since I didn't see your doodles yet, this is my first time seeing them,
\they look good,
waay fitting fora band of bandit, heheh
now I am just wandering who is Mrs. Ishihara and the 'red dawg'

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Antarija In reply to Velink [2016-05-17 20:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you, glad you think so! : D

Hopefuly some interesting people~

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DMKryl [2016-05-17 13:53:55 +0000 UTC]

I read the description first and I thought he was going to kill one of them in a rage outburst :V

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Antarija In reply to DMKryl [2016-05-17 20:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, come on, he's not that bad xD

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DrillBoysGirl [2016-05-17 13:33:01 +0000 UTC]

I want someone to use a Braviary in a Nuzlocke! I know it's probably a long shot, but I love them so much and I have never seen someone use one.

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Antarija In reply to DrillBoysGirl [2016-05-17 19:59:23 +0000 UTC]

That's exactly why I wanted to put them here. They appear so far away in the game, it's a a shame...

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DrillBoysGirl In reply to Antarija [2016-05-18 01:18:53 +0000 UTC]

It is! There are so many cool or interesting Pokemon I'd love to use on my team, but by the time I get to them...I've already got a dynamic going or it's the after game.

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rasaxe [2016-05-17 13:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Love the Braviarys! They are so fucking big! I feel like traveling to Mordor ....

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Antarija In reply to rasaxe [2016-05-17 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]

We shall first send a moth to lady Galadriela! ;D

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rasaxe In reply to Antarija [2016-05-17 19:48:38 +0000 UTC]

This comment has been deleted... by me...

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rasaxe In reply to rasaxe [2016-05-17 19:50:13 +0000 UTC]

This was meant for the Nuzlocke Doodles!!

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rasaxe In reply to rasaxe [2016-05-17 19:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Children! Look at this instead!
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Antarija In reply to rasaxe [2016-05-17 20:26:36 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Chiyuuhi [2016-05-17 12:57:15 +0000 UTC]

I like the character concepts on this page
EVERYBODY FLOP

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Antarija In reply to Chiyuuhi [2016-05-17 19:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, so glad to hear that! : D

Everybody do the flop~!

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Kaze-Blue [2016-05-17 12:44:14 +0000 UTC]

errebody do the flop!

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Antarija In reply to Kaze-Blue [2016-05-17 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Ā 

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Grazyfish [2016-05-17 11:51:52 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmm...

*looks at asahi

*looks at haikyuu members

HMMMMMMMMMM...

Great chapter!!! XD

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