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Published: 2009-04-12 17:23:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 545; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 12
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An idea I've had for a while, well this kind of eye anyways... bleeding backwards and with gravity..? I've doodled it lots of times and I thought it'd be cool to take a realistic approach to it in digital form this time.This is just a WIP, I was wondering if you guys had any input? Suggestions, like should I include more texture, less texture, define some areas, make some areas more faded, change colours, add a tint, etc.
Its an eye looking through a hole in a wall, I know its hard to tell, I'm going to fix it up so it looks more like a hole and so that the wall looks more like a wall... :P
Sorry I still haven't had time to get back to comments or be active on dA... when I find the time again I will >_<;;;
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Comments: 14
skipperofotters [2009-04-15 01:01:14 +0000 UTC]
WICKED.
Disturbing and awesome. Great mood and stuff |D
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LuxDani [2009-04-13 00:38:15 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, contrary to what someone else said, I like the undefined pupil. Gives it a more mysterious and blind feel.
Whatnow? Gravity-defying bloooood? Perhaps dripping from a wound above the eye instead? Nah, gravity-defying is much cooler. 8D
I think more textures for sure. Define the wrinkles even more and it would look freaking amazing.
The broken material, I can picture it as really reflective glass. Or tinted. The kind that you can't really see through. It would look really neat and still would match with the darkness that the critter is emerging from.
You would not believe how much this reminds me of some wicked virus victim of sorts. I'm still on my virus rage (virus books are my faves) so I'm kinda crazed about them. Bleeding eyes and blindness has been popular in the books that I've been reading.
FIND TIME GODDAMNIT
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ammmp [2009-04-12 19:55:27 +0000 UTC]
I remember seeing this in your planner xD I like it xD I like ohw you did the blood and the shinyness of teh eye! IT IS TEH SPIFFENS! and the details like wahpow! and yeah
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Fangeh [2009-04-12 18:58:08 +0000 UTC]
I think the iris/pupil mixture needs a bit more definition. Like make it seem more like a cut into the eye and some random striations. XD Its hard to describe eye detail things. The skin and blood look really nice so far. Very creepy ^^
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grandjackal [2009-04-12 18:44:49 +0000 UTC]
It's...crazy, it's creepy....but it's well done ^^
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qubodup [2009-04-12 17:29:24 +0000 UTC]
The skin is nicely organic, but what is grand here is the red flesh around the eye and the eye itself (both for having depth, whilst not being over-shaded, latter for being so wonderfully curiously white..) and the form of the hole's border.
However, if the dark gray is a hole, then the thin blood stream is confusing the eye, as it does not adopt darkness where darkness is.
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Anuwolf In reply to qubodup [2009-04-12 17:33:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! :]
Cha, I know about that, but seeing as this is a WIP as you pointed out.. P: Don't worry I'm gonna fix that x]
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qubodup In reply to qubodup [2009-04-12 17:30:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I didn't realize this was a WIP before reading above comment ^^
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Azerune [2009-04-12 17:24:37 +0000 UTC]
My suggestion (Nice piece, by the way) would be to texture the gray around to look more like cut/rusted steel.
I want to see the finished product of this.
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Anuwolf In reply to Azerune [2009-04-12 17:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Cha I was thinkin' that would work, kinda like a grungey rusted silent-hill look? xP
You will eventually x]
Thanks for the comment! :]
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