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Description Into the monster’s mouth!


In order to avoid religious ambiguation, here are called “essences”.


The new Ohrangers finally met their match, Onbu-bake (Impursonator in Zeorangers). When the monster attacked a school, the heroes wasted no time to get there. Unfortunately, the location was pretty far from Yellow and Pink, so they arrived later.

When they did, horror struck them. Standing in front of Onbu-bake was their friends, still and silent. They tried to call them, but it was no use. It was like no human inside the suits.

A part of their theory was right. Red, Blue, and Green had already fallen as victims of Onbu-Bake’s horrible attack. But Yellow and Pink didn’t know what really happened to their teammates, until it’s too late.

Like enraged zombies, the three enslaved Rangers attacked their own friends without mercy. Yellow and Pink tried to hold them back, but they soon overpowered. Battered, they could only watch as the monster towered over them, laughing.

Onbu-bake them showed them what happened to Red, Blue, and Green. He opened his mouth and three orbs of light shoot out from it. They materialized into the helmets of the three Ohrangers. Yellow and Pink could see their pain- and fear-filled faces, with eyes alredy turned pink like their master. Those were their essence (not souls), which the monster absorbed simply by hugging the poor heroes.

The fallen essences begged for release, but there were no freedom for them. The three screamed in pain as they were pulled back into the hell of Onbu-bake’s mouth. Then, the monster hugged Yellow and Pink.

They screamed with all of the air in their lungs before fallen still. Two orbs of light shoot out from their body, wandering before sucked into Onbu-bake’s gaping maw. They tried to run, but it was no use. Their sound died when the monster closed it. On his elastic skin, five Sentai essences eternally tried to break free from the torture inside!
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Comments: 9

nibblahfrog [2011-10-06 01:51:49 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! Oh this is so great! Heh now THIS is what I wanted to see in that episode...seeing the rangers struggle against its stretch body and get pulled in and absorbed forever...I love the added part about watching the rangers press out from within.

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anw-rev In reply to nibblahfrog [2011-10-10 23:27:45 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!

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Guy01 [2011-09-25 00:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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anw-rev In reply to Guy01 [2011-09-25 00:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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PhoenixGreeed [2011-09-21 22:28:25 +0000 UTC]

I remember seeing something this but it was in MMPR not Zeo!

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anw-rev In reply to PhoenixGreeed [2011-09-21 22:35:39 +0000 UTC]

In Ohranger, the monster was able to suck the "souls" of his victims
I just modify it

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PhoenixGreeed In reply to anw-rev [2011-09-21 22:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see o.o... Awesome job either way man

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anw-rev In reply to PhoenixGreeed [2011-09-21 23:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PhoenixGreeed In reply to PhoenixGreeed [2011-09-21 22:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Something like* this.... damn my eyes lol xD

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