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ViturinnFox [2011-07-14 14:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Well, let's start out with the good things, shall we?

The first and most important things is of course the message you want to give the one who see's it. The text is good and straight to the point, and the colored words are a great idea to bring the message to a higher point. The bagground is simple with one color, so that you dont loose track of what's important, which of course is good. And the water makes it unique and not too boring. Over all, great!

But if i had to point one thing out, it should be the writing. It makes the text a bit hard to read, so maybe with a thinner pen it would solve that problem. I dont write too good myself, but i am pretty confident with, that if you practiced, you could take the hole thing to a higher level. Because the text - im sorry to say it - kinda ruins a bit of it.

If there should be one more thing, then i think the background-color should be changed. For a happy, loving message like this, it would be a great idea with more happy colors or just a red to point out the colored text too.

But overall, it's a great picture! Creative and original!

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