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Published: 2013-05-21 14:37:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 22247; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 36
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Suddenly this image/plot pop into my mind, of Jim after waking up from his 2 week coma, his body is experiencing bolts of strange sensations eg. sudden increase in temperature etc due to Khan's blood and the experience he went through in the warp core. Unable to sleep, Jim resorts to sleeping beneath the shower and this behavior is found out by his FO Spock. *laugh* I also don't know what i am writing but i believe its rather angst (especially since Jim lost a great mentor, Pike and all that has happened to him)It is just an excuse to see Jim all wet on the floor.
JJ, you did this to me... TT falling in love with Kirk more after the 2nd movie OTL
Sequel to this: applepie1989.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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~AlkatrazProphet has made a more elaborated short STfanfic based on the snippet: archiveofourown.org/works/9489β¦ Thank you AlkatrazProphet! TT///TT
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Love the Idea behind it, even if I didn't get it before reading the description v.v
XP The last Pic looks like Kirk has eye shadow at his Eyes, isn't it Spock with the exe shadow?
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haha thats not eye shadow but literal shadow. Should have use another color for that 
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Ah, okay CXΒ But it loooksΒ good like this
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lol wut
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btw im not pro at English, whats "angst" ?
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ANGST -noun
aΒ feelingΒ ofΒ dread,Β anxiety,Β orΒ anguish. (dictionary.reference.com/browsβ¦
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I..ehh.. don't know what dread, anxiety or anguish means..im so stupid..but that's because I m not from Enland { }
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i see 
I am not a master in english and all being an Asian Chinese, but have been speaking it since young. I remember in my education, we have to memorize meanings of words from the english dictionary at one point
Β hmm,... basically.... angst is how to say it... i guess when a character experience a situation/event that leads to great despair/sadness and torment emotionally. does that help?
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so like, people afraid for the sea have to go to the sea and swim and they are forced to swim?
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haha not tat... hmm.... maybe in the case where... the person who is afraid of the sea finds his son drowning in sea but still went to attempt to save him despite it all *since they in a deserted beach* and found himself alive while his son dead. Everyday, he keeps on dreaming of his son calling him from the sea and even the sight of the sea torments him further.Β
His wife left him, unable to substain their marriage and the lost Β of their son. Everyday he wakes up, regretting and tormented. Haha i guess the idea of angst is a little like this? Β
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wow..that story is so sad man...it almost made me cry...
but yeah, i guess i know it now, but a little kid died for it
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noooooooooooooooooooooooo *dramatic background music*
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cannot wait to read it
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here it is
archiveofourown.org/works/9489β¦
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i enjoyed it 
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You don't know how glad I am that you asked.
The next chapter will be up as soon as I finish it.
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cool
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it's up!
archiveofourown.org/works/9489β¦
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I love the last line T///T bb
Thank you!
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*scream and cries* god I love chris pine as kirk! This image is beautiful lol. Have to admit I havnt seen the 2nd movie but am literally hating myself for it!! Love this pic!
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I love this, and your fic idea is compelling. Would you mind if I use it as inspiration and write something based on it?
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sure! I will like to read it
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Thank you so much! Honestly, this has been in my head for over a week now, so I'm excited to work on it. I'll send you a link once I have something.
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I have not forgotten about you...though I didn't realize it was JUNE when I wrote you this comment? I sketched out the beginning of a story and need to return to it, but if you want to see what I have so far (it's short), I stuck it on my Tumblr: www.museattack.com/post/736733β¦
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Thank you for sending me your story
You have good writing skills and have wonderfully pulled me inside Jim's head.Β
Can't wait for the longer complete version
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i do not
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aw D: - but yes, it would be very cool indeed X3
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thanks ^\\^ glad u enjoy it
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have you seen Stumppa's work on Vulcans?
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Ah, the colours are just great. I really love the way you draw Jim (and the rest of the crew), keep up the good work!
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Why has nobody written a fic about this yet? Why? WHY?
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I completely agree.... This second movie IS just wohaaaa!!!! I litetally went crazy at spock screaming : KAHAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!! I also want to take this occasion to say that your art IS awesome, really, I'm waiting to see what you'll do next. You draw Kirk just Sto arrivando! I always imagined it. Thank you!
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thanks
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I don;t think Jim got a chance to properly morn for Pike, with Kahn blowing stuff up and all, and Pike really was such a father figure to Jim 
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TT i guess during the one year break til the christening of the new USS enterprise, he did mourned. I hope we get to see fics based around that year XD
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oh poor Jim
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