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Description A snippet of an idea i thought of.
Read from LEFT to RIGHT.

Captain Kirk and the enterprise are in the midst of the 5 years exploratory mission when he begins to have dreams of a strange isolated barren planet and a woman who resides in the midst of loneliness. His frequent blankness and daze appearances on the bridge and outside shifts are not gone unnoticed by Spock and Mccoy and the crew.

But when the enterprise found the planet, Captain Kirk's dreams becomes a reality and his life becomes endangered.

Its up to the crew, Mccoy and Spock to rescue him, before its all too late.

A story about loneliness and belonging. hopefully K/S. rather open to ideas.

Honestly, i'm not a good story writer for star trek. But if someone who is definitely a better writer, hopes to write this story, I will be happy to give the story to him/her. Just dun forget to holler if you wish to take this story and send the link for me and the rest to read when done. *grin*

Sorry for the slow update, been busy with uni. assignments and all. Backgrounds are not my forte but will be doing more in terms of ideas i guess

But thanks to you guys for being here in DA watching me and supporting me. CHEERS TO YOU PIPS!

*update* Snot of the Dragon has taken the ownership of the idea to write as a fanfic. Wish her all the best!

The Prologue of the idea based on this snippet is out!! YESH!

Do give the author your review and i hope you enjoy it like i did. XD
Void of La'enora: [link]

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Comments: 179

Karmasutra3 [2014-09-23 01:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Love these kind of comic strip art snippets and this is a great one - but I can't for the life of me figure out what is in the slide immed after we see Jim's mouth saying "I'm here".Β  What is that?

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fanfictrekkie In reply to Karmasutra3 [2015-07-11 17:18:08 +0000 UTC]

I too wanted to know what that slide was supposed to be. Β Did you ever rec'v an answer telling you what it is? Β It's really bugging me not knowing lol.

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LinkHerodarklink [2014-06-05 20:26:14 +0000 UTC]

*-*

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Kyuubecky [2013-06-24 18:23:18 +0000 UTC]

oh my golly! Im off to read that story!!

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DaCaptin [2013-06-07 15:11:52 +0000 UTC]

you must continue!

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AbbyElena [2013-06-02 01:58:28 +0000 UTC]

..... i like it :3

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applepie1989 In reply to AbbyElena [2013-06-03 10:49:39 +0000 UTC]

glad you enjoy it :3

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AbbyElena In reply to applepie1989 [2013-06-04 15:06:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i do - ..... is it too rude to ask if you're planning on making more or was it just those few that you've done?

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applepie1989 In reply to AbbyElena [2013-06-05 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah just those few. it's not rude to ask of this

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AbbyElena In reply to applepie1989 [2013-06-08 18:12:03 +0000 UTC]

oh okay, thank you! :3 <3

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icychill12 [2013-05-26 01:22:48 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome. I wish whoever was writing the fic would write more, but what are ya gonna do?

Is there any chance that you'd finish this?

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applepie1989 In reply to icychill12 [2013-05-27 11:22:08 +0000 UTC]

I doubt so. So far snot still have not have any updates regarding the story but hope she has not abandon it

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icychill12 In reply to applepie1989 [2013-05-27 11:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I really want to see how it unfolds and everything. Your comics are really good, and I'd like to see more. Especially what happens to McCoy and Kirk.

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applepie1989 In reply to icychill12 [2013-05-28 18:22:03 +0000 UTC]

So do i TT thank you if there are more ideas for plots will try to draw them out.

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icychill12 In reply to applepie1989 [2013-05-28 19:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Thanks a lot.
Good luck on any others works you're currently working on.

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applepie1989 In reply to icychill12 [2013-05-31 14:32:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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icychill12 In reply to applepie1989 [2013-05-31 23:15:01 +0000 UTC]

No prob.

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DKAllen2012 [2013-02-06 06:33:41 +0000 UTC]

For some reason, those last few panels of Bones makes my heart go all fuzzy and happy (in that strange, sadistic way that only a fangirl can feel) well, I'm off to laugh maniacally as some other poor fandom, ciao!

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applepie1989 In reply to DKAllen2012 [2013-02-06 07:30:47 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks and ciao

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KAMB103 [2013-02-01 07:16:51 +0000 UTC]

AWWW!! I want mooooooore!! All of the snippets pertaining to Void of La'enora are my most favorite amoung your ST creations which i also love !! I really like the idea and snippets you have and am very sad that there hasnt been anything updated for the fic on ffnet but if i were given the choice id rather it be in comic form because the art you do is so fantastic!! That and I wish there were more ST fancomics out there, so thank you soooo much for sharing

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applepie1989 In reply to KAMB103 [2013-02-01 12:38:27 +0000 UTC]

i am glad you enjoyed them and you welcome

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yellowis4happy [2011-08-07 21:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Love the paneling here. And I still can't get enough of the way you draw everyone! Especially Spock. He's just lovely.

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Bloodredorion [2011-06-03 03:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Your "thoughts" are awesome.

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applepie1989 In reply to Bloodredorion [2011-06-05 16:58:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks though they stop there *laugh*

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Bloodredorion In reply to applepie1989 [2011-06-05 18:55:22 +0000 UTC]

But they are always intense.

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applepie1989 In reply to Bloodredorion [2011-07-06 07:48:41 +0000 UTC]

and i wonder why *laugh* My thoughts should have some R rated ones once in a while XD

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thetravelingbard [2011-04-24 19:51:52 +0000 UTC]

so....where is the rest of it? more more more!!!! *eager*

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applepie1989 In reply to thetravelingbard [2011-06-05 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]

sorry for the late reply. Never did any more for this but still, i'm glad you are interested of this. Thank you

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AnestassiaOuO [2011-03-15 23:21:37 +0000 UTC]

I NEED MORE

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applepie1989 In reply to AnestassiaOuO [2011-03-31 08:17:22 +0000 UTC]

haha will try

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TheDyeIsCast [2011-02-04 20:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

Your very good at drawing narrative - I love the angles you've used in some of the panels and the way you've used colour, its kept the feeling of fluidity and movement in there.

Was this ever finished or is this a cliff-hanger?

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applepie1989 In reply to TheDyeIsCast [2011-02-13 15:11:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks

I have always had an interest in comics, especially in narrative. For this, I didn't finished this as it is meant to be an idea/snippet. So i guessed its a cliffhanger

Snot-of-the-dragon is writing a fic for this idea. So far she hadn't updated yet due to life. But you can take a look at it and give support
[link]

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chocolatart [2011-01-08 19:17:39 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOU NOW!!!!
Write moar comics so my head can explode from awesome exposure plz kthx bai

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applepie1989 In reply to chocolatart [2011-02-13 15:13:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the love *laugh*
Well... for this snippet i have no continuation yet. But there are more snippets of other ideas coming up. So hope you will enjoy them when its up.

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emo-alice [2010-04-21 06:11:47 +0000 UTC]

OMG i just cried alittle bit!!! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please continue this!!!!

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applepie1989 In reply to emo-alice [2010-04-28 11:30:02 +0000 UTC]

will try thanks. Glad u like it

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emo-alice In reply to applepie1989 [2010-04-28 19:32:03 +0000 UTC]


oh yes I love this very much!

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Christydaae [2010-03-31 03:40:51 +0000 UTC]

I am absolutely facinated by this Idea! could I borrow it? I read snot-of-the-dragon's opening. I just have been DIEING to writ something star trekbut haven't had any good Ideas.

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applepie1989 In reply to Christydaae [2010-04-01 13:54:45 +0000 UTC]

that i dun know, since the idea is given to Snot of the dragon's.
you will have to ask her though. Sorry abt that.

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Christydaae In reply to applepie1989 [2010-04-01 16:06:26 +0000 UTC]

kk.

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Psycho-Poetry [2010-02-23 16:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap! I love this page!
Just a pity there's just this one.
It would be so great to read more! Seems like an exciting story!
And I love the way you draw.

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applepie1989 In reply to Psycho-Poetry [2010-02-27 17:49:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks glad you like it

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Psycho-Poetry In reply to applepie1989 [2010-02-28 10:02:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
It's awesome!

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applepie1989 In reply to Psycho-Poetry [2010-03-01 08:36:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Zukofangirl16 [2010-02-16 23:59:47 +0000 UTC]

All I can say is that I want this to be continued in comic form, and that I'll definitely read SnotoftheDragon's fanfic.

FFFFFFFFFFFFFF I HATE CLIFFHANGERS...D=

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applepie1989 In reply to Zukofangirl16 [2010-02-21 08:10:25 +0000 UTC]

me too XD

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Dr-Kara [2010-01-25 16:06:16 +0000 UTC]

HOW HAVE I NEVER SEEN THIS?!?

*jaw drops* ... you..this...amazing


... yea

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applepie1989 In reply to Dr-Kara [2010-01-27 15:13:42 +0000 UTC]

*laugh* thanks. hope you will like the story version that Snot-of-the-dragon be fleshing out

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Dr-Kara In reply to applepie1989 [2010-01-29 04:46:34 +0000 UTC]

most def

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secretidentity0423 [2010-01-25 04:16:16 +0000 UTC]

I was just curious who was writing the fanfic for this snippet, it is super amazing and I would love to read it! Trekkiegirl15 told me you guys gave it to someone else. Hope to see another drawing and read the story!! It is awesome!!

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