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Published: 2009-09-18 22:14:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 23760; Favourites: 347; Downloads: 145
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A snippet of an idea i thought of.Read from LEFT to RIGHT.
Captain Kirk and the enterprise are in the midst of the 5 years exploratory mission when he begins to have dreams of a strange isolated barren planet and a woman who resides in the midst of loneliness. His frequent blankness and daze appearances on the bridge and outside shifts are not gone unnoticed by Spock and Mccoy and the crew.
But when the enterprise found the planet, Captain Kirk's dreams becomes a reality and his life becomes endangered.
Its up to the crew, Mccoy and Spock to rescue him, before its all too late.
A story about loneliness and belonging. hopefully K/S. rather open to ideas.
Honestly, i'm not a good story writer for star trek. But if someone who is definitely a better writer, hopes to write this story, I will be happy to give the story to him/her. Just dun forget to holler if you wish to take this story and send the link for me and the rest to read when done. *grin*
Sorry for the slow update, been busy with uni. assignments and all. Backgrounds are not my forte but will be doing more in terms of ideas i guess
But thanks to you guys for being here in DA watching me and supporting me. CHEERS TO YOU PIPS!
*update* Snot of the Dragon has taken the ownership of the idea to write as a fanfic. Wish her all the best!
The Prologue of the idea based on this snippet is out!! YESH!
Do give the author your review and i hope you enjoy it like i did. XD
Void of La'enora: [link]
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thanks. Its actually just been out on fanfic.net. I will post the link on my journal so do check out the author's take. *grin*
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Nevermind lol, I just read the comment above. Good luck Snot of the Dragon, can't wait for it!!
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If it's alright with you I would like to take a crack at writing the story. I've been wanting to write a ST: 2009 story. What would you like to see in it, other the the info at the top and S/K?
The link to my page is here: [link]
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thanks for taking interest in this.
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Oh, this is great! Something about your art style is very wonderful and fitting for Star Trek. It's like a cross between manga and cell shaded comics. If you ever want to do more, I can't wait to see it!
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thanks
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Just never feel rushed by any means. If there's anything Star Trek fans know, it's that patience is a virtue.
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Shyyyyzzz. I think I just died a little bit. 
Haha, you really have no idea how happy I am right now. 
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haha, thanks.
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Oh my god...Chekov is adorable and your artistic ability is astounding.
Do you need a fic writer? I work at the st xi kink meme and would be more than happy to make this a fic
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thanks
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YAY! : D
K/s would be keen >> In a OMG I LOVE YOU way
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Very nice comic flow. Love your style, you've got the action sections looking fantastic, that's so hard to do! (Well, I find it really hard anyway.)
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Looks really good!! Hope to see more soon <3
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just wonderful hun, hope you make another page of this.
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Whoooa dude, this is great.
I'm at loss for words.
DD:....
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thanks. glad to see you are back in DA dude.
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Oh maaan.
I wish.. D:
More like buried under piles of homework and work-load.
But I shall attempt post some shit pulled out of my ass
Because it's my precious friend's birthday tomorrow!
You have a greaaaat time, son. <3
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thanks dad. when you manage to pull yourself out from the pile, be waiting *laugh*
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Hoepfully I will soon, son. D:
*Pats shoulder*
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Hopefully after schhol I'll put up the 1st chapter!!
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You mind if I give it a go?? I Luv it soooooo much!!!
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Hahahaha thanks *grin*
But still, someone before hand has asked. so i'm waitin for her reply. But if you reply back fast and say you decide to write, then I will give the story to you if you reply back first.
so far TheStupidCupid and Imaginaryending wants to try it out too. So i will send the same message to them.
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I'd love to do it if possible!
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you will be doing it from beginning to end right? I can't wait to see it from the beginning of how it all begins. Good luck
TheStupidCupid has also given her share of her idea of the continuation of this snippet so will send to you by private note
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Yup! I've already got some started. But this is my first Star Trek FF but I think I've got a good Idea of what I'm doing. I'll message you the story once I've put it up somewhere , which will be as soon as the 1st Chapter is done and I have like a paragraph left to finish, so soon!!
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Whoa, thats fast o.o *clap hands in awe*
Will be waiting impatiently *grin* Can't wait.
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Oh, definitely tempting to write, but I'm probably a pretty bad writer. ^_^;
I hope someone writes this! It's definitely got my attention <3
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OOOO OOOO YOU WANT SOMEONE TO HELP!?
I CANZ DO ZAT! *beams from ear to ear*
and even better YOU WANT SOME SPORK IN THAT?! I could come up with a logical suggestion!
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Hahahaha thanks *grin*
But still, someone before hand has asked. so i'm waitin for her reply. But if you reply back fast and say you decide to write, then I will give the story to you if you reply back first.
so far Trekkiegirl15 and Imaginaryending wants to try it out too. So i will send the same message to them.
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okay so bones tries to get kirk to stay put where he was but he just ups and leaves?
... story time.
Dr. Mccoy swings himself around to the rest of the crew and begins throwing orders around..."you guys stay here and try to get a signal, no use to put your lives in jeopardy for this..." evil glimpse towards the captain, "dumbass...", the doctor trots to catch up with him while one of the red shirt flips out his communicator.
Chekov looks up to the vulcan and beams, "ive gotz a connection." Spock waves a hand letting chekov answer it and listens to the conversation patiently.
"McCoy has gone after the Captain, he was saying some kind of gibberish about someone waiting for him and just wandered off to this unusal building that appeared before us..."
Spock, hoping to god no one saw the emotion on his face, flings nearly into chekovs lap, clicks a button, and replies sharply, "thank you, i will be down there shortly, that will be all" and snaps at scotty, demanding to be sent down as well.
mean while mccoy is pulling all his weight down on kirk, trying his best to keep him away from the eerie building, but jim just wont budged.
"dammit jim, you just cant make anything easy, can you?"
up they come upon a big door and the voice rang again in kirks head, "closer..."
the captain mumbles, "yes", mccoy replying by giving him a dry look. (=.= my god jim...)
Spock can see the building and is running as fast as his legs can take him, his equipment strapped to his shoulder, the scanner to his side. if only he could just get there in time...
even from a distance he could see the doors through the fog, the little shapes of the captain and the dr (who seems to be yanking on jims arm to go the other way) dissapear its depths, the door slowly closing.
'if i could only... increase my speed... by 6%... perhaps...'
the gravity seemed to be against spock and the doors slammed shut just as he got there. pratically running into it, he slammed his fists into the door in pure anger. "NO! DAMNIT NO!" after taking a few deep breaths, he found that being angry at the door would not get him any closer to jim. anger is illogical. vulcans just dont do anger. he took a step back and scanned the buildings door...
"fasinating... it appears this construction before me does not exist. we have came upon this situation many times before but this is not as we know it..." and he silents himself as he realized talking out loud to noone is illogical.
the vulcan sat down upon the steps and went over through what the chances are and how to get through this thing to kirk. something annoyed him, the voice in the back of his head, the feeling that seemed to scratch at his ribs, the silent anger... something pissed him off.
was it the idea that mccoy got dragged in there with jim and it wasnt HIM, SPOCK, the man that usually was always by his captains side?
or perhaps it was the rage that reared its ugly head everytime his captain was enticed by someone, interested in someone else besides him?
spock shook his head mentally. "NO, im just protective of the captain, which makes absolute sense. its illogical to say im jealous of any close relationships kirk has besides the one with me because all i want is the safety for the captain." the little voice in his head mummbled "yeah thats right" sounding very unsure of himself.
spock straighten himself out and overthought every thing, trying to find the most logic and accurate way to get inside the nonexisting trap.
............................
if you like that i will keep going but whatever... ya know. this aint really comic form but you can do anything you like with the speaking parts and mix it up a bit.
you wanted a little spock and kirk, so i just decided that spock pushes away the idea of CRUSH and throws the name PROTECTIVE over it. logical? no. but whatever makes him feel better right?
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thanks for the immediate reply! *grin widely* indeed whatever makes him feel better, but i can understand spock's pain on not being beside his captain when such a thing happens, especially when he sees signs in his captain of his demise.
I will be handing the idea to Trekkiegirl15 though to do the story from the very beginning to end, and will be sending her your idea of the continuation to her. Thank you so much for the interest in this idea. If you two wish to collaborate in this, I will not mind
There will be another snippet after this one of the aftermath of the mishap of Kirk. Will do it by next week.
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D: NO THAT WASNT THE FULL OF IT I WAS JUST GIVING YOU A SNIP!
but thats okay, i can draw mine own, a little sad because i thought i would get happy news!
i bought star trek tos and it didnt fricken work, today is just not my day. at least tommorrow i know what im going to do in art class.
ttyl.
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Sorry about that. I am really glad that you like the idea alot. *bow apologetically* Can't wait to see your version out here. *grin* Just dun forget to send me the link!
Eh? You bought the TOS that didn work? YOu should complain to the CD shop and demand a brand new one I'm sure. DVD or blueray though?
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dvd and high def. dont worry i bitched out walmart and got the sucker working. watched the first episode, man trap, last night and almost peed my pants at the menu for the star trek dvds! they look like the transporting controls! EEK SO CHEESY!
nah its okay its just hard to work with other people when you gotta go back and forth. ill keep reading yours as well.
im writing one called, WHERE THE VULCAN HEART IS and it sounds like a romance but it really isnt. maybe it'll grow to one but for now its not one at all.
it kinda reminds me of that fanfic you love to much called home, so i gotta move it into another direction...
i just want to get a understanding into kirks head and then i can head away from the planet vulcan, because right now its kinda forshadowing its destruction. this comic is like a mixture of the orginal series and the new movie which i havent seen into my own style, just what i want to draw out.
and it sounds like i did alot? no, only two pages, and one is pure sketches. god. i need to get some work done.
its just every page i draw out is usually five big boxes, because i hate drawing panels and crap. and like i said, i dont want to copy ideas from anyone but to push this story in the direction i really want it to go, then i gotta make them go to vulcan.
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hahahaha, at least walmart is good
Thanks
Its ok. just do it and see how from there. I'm sure you are taking the steps to create this and you will be improving like crazy from here on. Can't wait to see it
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actually it has changed a bit, and no its a comic and it will be on deviant art, on mine here.
XD i still dont know what the hell im going to call it but it starts out with kirk supporting spock while he goes to meet his father. savik gives spock a memory chip of his childhood and the two return to the ship, this is what im planning to happen...
spock, of course letting his emotions get the best of him once again, sends the whole ship into a time lapse within watching the tapes, making the whole crew reverse back into time. the whole crew becomes their younger selves and nobody seems to know how to control the ship or even reach the control panels!
it'll be so fricken cute! but deadly because kirk has a short amount of time until the ship just heads towards trouble.
and everyone, being children, seem to forget what death really means.
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Whoaaa... Can't wait *excited* you better holler at me when its done
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eh i think i will start working on it now, first page done.
i just want to start drawing them already. as kids of course
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its just the trans-page.
getting them there... yesh.
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MOAR PLEEZ!
This is so intense. Good work!
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Please oh please oh please continue this!
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D8 Oh Noes!! the suspense-----
(awesome coloring and drawing skills :3)
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