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Published: 2011-05-26 19:56:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 676; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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This is a large scale architectural model I created experimenting in Cinema 4D. Also yes im aware there is no windows or doors, its conceptual and experimenting with shape.Related content
Comments: 4
Cymae [2011-06-21 23:43:45 +0000 UTC]
First, I would suggest looking at your lighting and composition. It's all very dark and up the back and hard to see. In terms of shillouette, it's interesting, but I'm not really getting the sense that it's a building yet.
In response to your request for critique,
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Technohippy [2011-06-07 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]
In terms of shape I think that its pleasing and bold... I might suggest that to show these piece off, the scene needs more contrast. A lighter background and stronger light might help this
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ArchitekOGP In reply to Technohippy [2011-06-07 22:07:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your feedback . I agree it is a little dark, also I think it needs to be aligned in some places. I will work on this, I want to add some kind of abstract landscape also.
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