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Published: 2019-10-27 22:33:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 492; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Description Remember oh those who voyage under the sun and rest under its shade. For there are two kinds of sleep.

The first, sought by many in the end of their daily strive, usually found in comfortable natural or hand made shelters, with the presence, care and warmth of loved ones.

This sleep, gives hope and strength to those who seek it. Another of its benefits is the regeneration of the body and its energies, preparing the seeker for a new dawn.

Be wary though because there is the other one. The one that without a careful examination may look like the first. But the difference lies in between every heartbeat, in between every silent breath.

The sleep of those whose smile no longer finds home in their faces, the sleep of those who can't find peace under the sun they walk, the sleep of those whose purpose was taken away.

This sleep, unlike the first, won't provide hope nor strength, won't regenerate their bodies nor give energy preparing the seeker for a new dawn.

The sleep to forget, is merely a door, a escape route, a dark cave. Away from everything, away from the pain. Those who embrace it, find no comfort, but to them, it is not about comfort, it is about not being.

How long this sleep may last? It is hard to tell, as every seeker is unique, however one thing can be said. Some embrace it so deeply, that their desire of not being comes true.

And so they are carried to the depths, where the sun never shows its face. This is the fate of such seekers, but please remember, that hope is generous, and like the sun, it shines upon everyone.

If one wishes to accept it, the dark cave, the escape route, and the door will no longer be necessary, and a new journey may start.

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This is the first page of a story I'm writing, this story is very personal and anyone who knows me a bit might understand what it is all about. Right now the beta name is Journey, the character here was drawn before with a wolf and a doe, and they might meet again at some point. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, specially because I'm having to use extra brainpower to write, something I rarely do.
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Comments: 20

RaRiz [2019-11-11 18:20:47 +0000 UTC]

:о ...   

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ARCR-CRic In reply to RaRiz [2019-12-15 15:47:42 +0000 UTC]

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Cambion-Hunter [2019-10-29 03:31:33 +0000 UTC]

This makes for a great prologue.

Well emphasizing the sense of vulnerability and alertness.........

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ARCR-CRic In reply to Cambion-Hunter [2019-11-10 15:45:48 +0000 UTC]

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Cambion-Hunter In reply to ARCR-CRic [2019-11-10 16:09:02 +0000 UTC]

You are absolutely welcome, ARCR.

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VulpineWarrior-91 [2019-10-28 16:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah, the daily strive. Lovely work as usual!

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ARCR-CRic In reply to VulpineWarrior-91 [2019-11-10 15:39:43 +0000 UTC]

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VulpineWarrior-91 In reply to ARCR-CRic [2019-11-10 19:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Never too late to start!

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SouthpawLynx [2019-10-28 15:50:14 +0000 UTC]

The spiritual qualities of your work continue to be strong. in the imagery, there are qualities of birth and death all in one. A moment of rare peace and impending danger. In this state, all is suspended, waiting for a choice. I'm so happy to see more development of your world. I really like your themes of trauma and how we try to deal with it.

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ARCR-CRic In reply to SouthpawLynx [2019-11-10 15:39:07 +0000 UTC]

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sintel16 [2019-10-28 07:56:55 +0000 UTC]

great job this image gives out some powerful feelings
and the text..
agree with and -very powerful indeed and very poetically written-it reminds me of a poem of sorts. its a promising start of a story/journey to come

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ARCR-CRic In reply to sintel16 [2019-11-10 15:33:40 +0000 UTC]

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sintel16 In reply to ARCR-CRic [2019-12-30 00:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Keep going-the important stories cannot be left undone, they will be waiting for being finished 

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ARCR-CRic In reply to sintel16 [2020-02-22 14:40:34 +0000 UTC]

I shall keep going  

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Iron-Ed [2019-10-28 01:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, Ariel.  I knew at first glance that this was not a warm and happy sleep.  Nice anatomy too.  Any reason the subject is a raccoon?

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ARCR-CRic In reply to Iron-Ed [2019-11-10 15:21:52 +0000 UTC]

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Andibi [2019-10-28 01:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Fine work indeed.  Your description of the two kinds of sleep is clear and draws a sharp contrast (as perfesser-bear says).  It seems like a good poetic introduction to a story that has a strong metaphysical component.  That is to say, it feels like you will be writing a story of a journey that is both physical and symbolic.

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ARCR-CRic In reply to Andibi [2019-11-10 15:20:36 +0000 UTC]

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perfesser-bear [2019-10-27 23:25:51 +0000 UTC]

The image is great, but...


The text is even more powerful. It both educates and warns. You paint a warm picture then blow it away with a chill wind. Excellent, in the original sense of that word.

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ARCR-CRic In reply to perfesser-bear [2019-11-10 15:13:40 +0000 UTC]

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