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The crowd bothered both of the girls in their own way; Sarai was wary of every single person that looked at her without giving her a smile, she was on edge; Dawn on the other hand, felt rather uncomfortable in between so many strangers, the Shane in front of her was the only thing that kept her from running back home.
"S-So, what was it you wanted to talk about darling?" the elf asked the smaller girl in front of her, trying to keep her mind off he people around them.
"Him." The girl replied, Dawn could hear her scowl and that made her curious.
"Ah, the mysterious him, eh?" How many times had Dawn wondered who thishim was. She had wanted to know for some time now, but Sarai would never tell her, Dawn knew it had to be for a reason, so she never really insisted.
"Yes dear DD.As I've told you before, he calls me different nicknames: Hot Stuff, Elia, Babe… etc." Sarai stopped right there and hesitated to continue.
"I won't laugh Elia, just tell me; these people won't hear a word… I hope…" Dawn encouraged her to go on.
"Yesterday, he called me… Princess…" Sarai looked at the ground and when Dawn bend down to look at her, she saw… worry?
"Princess?" She asked, standing upright again. She looked down at the girl smiling.
"Y-Yes, and then he started to treat me like one. He even bent down! I don't know if he's just joking around or—" Sarai stopped when she hear a light laughter coming from behind her. "Hey! I thought you weren't going to laugh…" she pouted, a blush on her cheeks and nose.
"Hehe, sorry Elia. But your innocence is adorable." Dawn grabbed her hand and stroked it softly with her fingers. "Not every guy is confident enough to do that I must say."
Sarai stopped and looked up at her friend. "But then…" she rubbed her arm nervously and bit her lip.
"I see it's bothering you, let's go get a drink and a bite to eat, to clear your mind you know." She put her hand on Sarai's soft hair.
The girl closed an eye once she felt Dawn's hand and looked up at her. Her cheeks and nose were still flushing but she nodded slowly. "Okay, thanks dear."
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Sarai and Dawn like to hang out a lot, Dawn normally doesn't talk but she loves to listen to Sarai's ramblings about this him she never names. When it isn't about this mysterious guy, they just enjoy each other's company since none of them are actually good talkers.
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I would see this as a redraw/remake of this. I also changed the dialogue.

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The crowd bothered both of the girls in their own way; Sarai was wary of every single person that looked at her without giving her a smile, she was on edge; Dawn on the other hand, felt rather uncomfortable in between so many strangers, the Shane in front of her was the only thing that kept her from running back home.
"S-So, what was it you wanted to talk about darling?" the elf asked the smaller girl in front of her, trying to keep her mind off he people around them.
"Him." The girl replied, Dawn could hear her scowl and that made her curious.
"Ah, the mysterious him, eh?" How many times had Dawn wondered who thishim was. She had wanted to know for some time now, but Sarai would never tell her, Dawn knew it had to be for a reason, so she never really insisted.
"Yes dear DD.As I've told you before, he calls me different nicknames: Hot Stuff, Elia, Babe… etc." Sarai stopped right there and hesitated to continue.
"I won't laugh Elia, just tell me; these people won't hear a word… I hope…" Dawn encouraged her to go on.
"Yesterday, he called me… Princess…" Sarai looked at the ground and when Dawn bend down to look at her, she saw… worry?
"Princess?" She asked, standing upright again. She looked down at the girl smiling.
"Y-Yes, and then he started to treat me like one. He even bent down! I don't know if he's just joking around or—" Sarai stopped when she hear a light laughter coming from behind her. "Hey! I thought you weren't going to laugh…" she pouted, a blush on her cheeks and nose.
"Hehe, sorry Elia. But your innocence is adorable." Dawn grabbed her hand and stroked it softly with her fingers. "Not every guy is confident enough to do that I must say."
Sarai stopped and looked up at her friend. "But then…" she rubbed her arm nervously and bit her lip.
"I see it's bothering you, let's go get a drink and a bite to eat, to clear your mind you know." She put her hand on Sarai's soft hair.
The girl closed an eye once she felt Dawn's hand and looked up at her. Her cheeks and nose were still flushing but she nodded slowly. "Okay, thanks dear."
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Sarai and Dawn like to hang out a lot, Dawn normally doesn't talk but she loves to listen to Sarai's ramblings about this him she never names. When it isn't about this mysterious guy, they just enjoy each other's company since none of them are actually good talkers.
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I would see this as a redraw/remake of this. I also changed the dialogue.