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As if running through a flameMy heels did scorch as they burst past the barren sand
As if breathing was no option
My lungs did wither as they drew breath from the burnt air
As if knowledge had no merit
My head did pound as it tried to hold it's blurry focus
As if the ground were water
My body did fall as though the ground was water
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Comments: 3
FQUESHARK [2011-08-10 01:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Good at writing too I see.
I like the repetition and the picture this write paints.
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ARTnoob In reply to FQUESHARK [2011-08-10 03:22:00 +0000 UTC]
Haha sheesh.
Compliments....
Thank you.
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purplelining [2011-04-20 13:42:51 +0000 UTC]
I like it rather a lot, simple but really rather powerful
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