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Published: 2011-07-10 00:46:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Oh how radiant the skiesTurning purple, orange, blue and black
How majestic a sunset
As I wonder where you're at
What a lovely evening
It would be to hold your hand
Looking at the turning night
As we stare and stand
But then I notice something heinous
Something very out of place
Your hand isn't in mine
I can't truly see your face
How wonderful a night would be
To be right at your side
As we look into the heavens
As the sun slowly hides....
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EccoGirl [2011-07-10 06:00:41 +0000 UTC]
I 'really' like this one
I'm always impressed by people that can produce good poems, i was in a poetry club in high school and had to lisson to my friend unending suply of werwolf poems for the two years that we were in it and i've only ever writen one that i felt was even remotly good lol, but i digress
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ARTnoob In reply to EccoGirl [2011-07-10 06:08:28 +0000 UTC]
Haha, well thank you.
I don't think I'm that good, but hey, if someone reads it, I must be doing something right.
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