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Published: 2008-09-20 06:14:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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You're not a bullet babyYou're the magazine
You're the reason baby
I get shot in the streets
You're not a period baby
That stops the sentence
You're a comma baby
You keep me going for seconds
You're not a story baby
You're the bookstore
And when I turn the page
You keep me reading more
Baby you don't know
You're the entire collection
From A to Z and 1 to 9
I just want give you affection
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Comments: 26
Just something to whisper in her ear at night
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You mean that wasn't the intention?
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I think if I were able to whisper this in a girls ear at night...
I might be able to live happily.
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Start practicing then I guess
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It's not a problem of me not being able to...
But it's the lack of the girl.
A girl I would care for enough to say it.
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I wish it were that easy.
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I like to imagine it is. Ha...:/
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And claws the size of...
Watermelons.
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If I was good enough... You could just come over.
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You just may be.
You're always on my mind and you make me smile.
Not too many people can do that.
<3
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Aww... That's so nice! 
You know you're ALWAYS on my mind too, right? 
And maybe my grammar mistakes are what makes you smile (or even laugh!) 
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Ohhh I love this! I love the pattern, and of course the metaphors, and it has such a cool rhythm!
<3!
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finishes too early! Love it though, very excellent rhythm.
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Haha, yeah.
It is kinda short for my work... but I didn't want it to drag on.
...And I ran out of metaphors.
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