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ARTnoob — Circle of Pseudo-Crypticism
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Published: 2008-09-03 08:27:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Sometimes I look on yesterdayWhen things were just right
No complaints or arguments
No hate, wars, or fights
A certain sort of sunshine
It always made me smile
And thought I thought the end
It would only take a while
The circle never stops
And at a time I thought it would
Don't think I forget about that time
When sleeping felt so good
I remember the water
The sun beating on my face
As the sun went down
I layed in the perfect place
Don't you remember
What it was like to be fine
Maybe it'll be the end
When the circle comes back in time
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Comments: 5
abusing a substance to block out depression, is my guess on the topic.
I really like how this poem flows. nice job.
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Actually...
It's a metaphor about a girl.
And thank you.
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well.. i dont know what you are portraying, relationships with family, friends, girlfriends.. but i see drugs.. as i relate it to personal experience i guess, this is very good.. very touching.. lovely rhythm.
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Thank you very much.
No drug references in it, but I could see how you could get that.
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