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ARTnoob — Drowning in Jealousy by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-02-09 12:37:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I’m jealous
Under the surface
No air to breath
Screaming and writhing
I claw my way out
Into the cold whereabouts
And I can’t get back in
To save my skin

I shudder and twist with a nickel in my back
It is lodged there and you can’t take it back
And all the pain truly seems to lack
A course, for a train to track

And as the tongue comes untied I see the tide
Of my emotion and my guilty ride
On the only thing I care to hide
Since I think I’m dead, on the inside

Finger pushing up the cloth
Legs kicking a froth
No getting out
Gonna drown
Under the surface
And jealous
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Comments: 7

niyati226 [2008-02-15 09:02:17 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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ARTnoob In reply to niyati226 [2008-02-15 17:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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niyati226 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-15 18:20:32 +0000 UTC]

np

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-02-12 10:57:46 +0000 UTC]

It hurts this. Because its good. Because it hits the nail upon the head.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-02-15 17:29:53 +0000 UTC]

I tend to get to the point and emotions behind motives in my writings.

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-17 15:22:51 +0000 UTC]

you do. Which works well for me.

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TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-02-09 16:13:36 +0000 UTC]

Weirdly known feeling.

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