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Published: 2008-07-21 18:56:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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If there was a reason for dreaming at nightI'd have to say you were in sight
I never held close what I wanted to hold
And now that it's gone I feel cold
If you were the reason for sleepless nights
I'd have to say it's my right
It hurts in the daytime to not see your face
And now and again you leave no trace
But more upon the day break you lay
Your fingers and their hopeless decay
My subtle mind brings consequence
Torturing my own defense
It throws me into arms of sense
And my thoughts become thick and dense
More nights will come
When I'm all alone
And you're all I think of
In my empty home
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Comments: 11
ARTnoob In reply to CabernetBard [2008-07-22 18:05:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.
That comment means alot.
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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-07-22 09:57:57 +0000 UTC]
This is so gripping. I feel i could almost read it without looking it flows so well. if you catch me?
Beautiful as always.
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elisiabattell [2008-07-22 02:39:50 +0000 UTC]
Gah. This actually gave me chills, and I love it.
Amazing, as usual, and I'm totally jealous of your mad writing skills.
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jexxvous08 [2008-07-21 22:55:24 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful
i hope everything is well
where in the US are you?
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jexxvous08 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-21 23:06:39 +0000 UTC]
oh yes.
you've told me before
sorry, i forgot.
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