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Published: 2008-02-28 22:01:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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I’m kind of, tryin’ to, fly to the oceanI’m kind of, tryin’ to, fly to the sea
I’ve got my wings, my seat up, my pedal to the floor
I’m flying up, tieing up all responsibilities
The cloud on the face
A soft gentle tissue
A rag that was made
For a newborn face
Where oh where
Could I possibly be
Could I be over land
Could I be over sea
Am I lost in an airfield
All by myself
Am I lost in the rainbow
Sitting on my shelf
Will I find a new adventure,
Will the clouds take me there
Will I wake up on morning,
Wondering now where
It’s a different site,
Every single morning,
And every single night
It’s the same
And so here in the cluds,
I’ll keep trying, and keep flying,
To the Ocean or Sea
I’ll strap back on my famous wings
Pedal to the metal and I'll be flying,
Letting go of my sanity
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Comments: 17
ARTnoob In reply to BlueShadowM [2008-03-29 16:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
This is one of the few I am really proud of.
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CabernetBard [2008-02-29 18:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Well, you got me singing and clicking my fingers! =] A really catchy song
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ARTnoob In reply to CabernetBard [2008-02-29 23:27:55 +0000 UTC]
I wish I could write music, lol.
... Or have a music making program, lol.
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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-02-29 11:41:58 +0000 UTC]
lovely rhythm, couple of typos there though "will i wake up on morning" and "and so here in the cluds." apart from that, i like this, great speed to it.
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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-02-29 16:17:42 +0000 UTC]
After I uploaded this, I tried to edit my smistake, and it didn't work.
Oh well.
You see like my one typo a month thing, lol.
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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-29 18:17:05 +0000 UTC]
sorry if it upset you that i noticed! just wanted to make you aware i still love it!
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niyati226 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-29 05:15:10 +0000 UTC]
ya that's the only difference - i dont try! damn me , poetry has gone for a toss lately , i must start work now!
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ARTnoob In reply to niyati226 [2008-02-29 05:18:51 +0000 UTC]
Just write when you feel like it.
No better poetry,
Writing alone is trying.
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cherno-alphas [2008-02-29 02:53:54 +0000 UTC]
I had a dream once that the ocean turned into clouds.
it kinda reminded me of that
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