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Published: 2008-05-28 18:01:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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There once was a girl who never criedNever got sad or mad, and definitely never lied
The curl of her smile was perfect and blended
And her spontaneous whit never offended
This girls name to me was known as Love
I thought we fit together like hand and glove
She told me things that made me think she was unique
True and honest to make me believe
An off handed chance that she might want me back
Mine was a shoulder to shrug, and a face to be slapped
I didnβt mind when she told me her story
All the things sheβd done filled with glory
I tried to match but her beauty was unbridled
I stuttered and my words went idle
And those these days were long gone,
far and away
I still think of Love,
to this very day
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Comments: 12
ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-05-29 04:48:16 +0000 UTC]
Indeed.
Not really a run, just a span of time where I have the chance to write more often.
But I miss my booze.
It'd make it a little better.
Maybe this weekend.!!.
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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-05-30 06:58:58 +0000 UTC]
I should use my wide open spans of time to write more...don't rely on the booze too much.
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vanillaxlight [2008-05-28 22:17:53 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot, kiddo. It's sort of defeatist.. sad... melancholy. But I like it.
Sad, though... hm
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ARTnoob In reply to vanillaxlight [2008-05-29 00:54:55 +0000 UTC]
Haha.
I do sad pretty well, lol.
=]]
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MenagerieBreach [2008-05-28 21:09:10 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Great success! (lol. I <3 Borat!!)
This is so sweet. My favorite line is "Mine was a shoulder to shrug, and a face to be slapped". Keep up the excellent work!
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ARTnoob In reply to MenagerieBreach [2008-05-28 21:59:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
I try to appease.
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MenagerieBreach In reply to ARTnoob [2008-05-28 22:03:21 +0000 UTC]
And you have succeeded!
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TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-05-28 19:29:59 +0000 UTC]
Cliff, it's always the same...
Poems like this one touch me so deeply inside, move me and make me believe you'd be an awesome boyfriend...
It's beautiful, you know...?
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