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Published: 2008-05-23 22:43:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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He’s hated ‘cuz he waited for the wrong girlIt’s too late to change his fate in this world
He’s going to be lonely
He’s going to be sad
He’s going to live a long life
Knowing what he never had
Though is it really his fault
I could’ve swore it was hers
I think she led him on
With those alligator tears
The drops that never go away
They're always in her eye
Can you really blame him
For giving it a try
And now it’s gone
And now it’s over
She left him to leave
Now all that’s left, is to get older…
Her impression made him stay by his phone late at night
Any other callers, and he would simply deny
So in essence, I swear it’s all her fault
The reason that he’s locked up, tighter than a vault
It’s all gone now
It’s all over now
She is far out of sight
Now all that’s left, is to make it through the night…
She’s far gone
You’ve got to get over
This thought of
You and her
Pain left,
Heart hurt,
Waiting for,
The wrong girl
Sleep now…
Hated boy…
Try to wake…
Tomorrow…
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Comments: 8
I was thinking it had an amazing ring to it, and then I looked up to see that it was put in song.
I love this. You're so good at making your words leave an impact.
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Haha, it's what I do, and how I roll.
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There is also hope that tomorrow will bring a relief... At least I see it like this.
And I have a feeling it appears a lot in your poetry. - "tomorrow" as a hope, as an escape, as something that is going to bring something "better" than today.
I like it.
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You pretty much got it.
=]]
I always hate the day I'm in, when things get bad.
Obviously, lol.
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Well... Same with me.
Obviously, *winks*
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My favorite lines:
"...It’s all gone now
It’s all over now
She is far out of sight
Now all that’s left, is to make it through the night…
She’s far gone
You’ve got to get over
This thought of
You and her
Pain left,
Heart hurt,
Waiting for,
The wrong girl
Sleep now…
Hated boy…
Try to wake…
Tomorrow… "
Beautiful poem- touches somewhere deep inside...
I know the feeling of waiting for the wrong person.
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Yeah.
Good thing we're still smiling.
<3
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