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ARTnoob — Have a Seat by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-01-31 03:43:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description I take a seat on the floor
And look at the screen beyond the door
I see the snow falling outside
As I wonder what it's like to hide
I hear the music sing in my ear
And it is all I want to hear
And then her voice creeps in my dear
And I am lost alone in fear

I drink until the snow is blurry
It seems as if there is now flurry
Just cut paper snowfalkes falling there
Falling to the ground like freshly cut white hair
And as I focus on the sound
I feel perplexed and quite profound
It muffles and slurs its quiet whisper now
And now I am laying on the ground

Have a seat and sit with me
So that you can truly see
What I am and truly be
Uncomfortable with my glee
I'm unconscious but I hear your voice
Keep talking that sweet noise
It keeps me alive and poise
It is only of my only joys
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Comments: 13

CabernetBard [2008-02-20 16:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written =]

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ARTnoob In reply to CabernetBard [2008-02-21 08:14:49 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you think so.

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niyati226 [2008-02-15 09:08:08 +0000 UTC]

amazing as always , looks like im becoming your fan now eh ?

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ARTnoob In reply to niyati226 [2008-02-15 17:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I am glad you like my writings enough to consider yourself my fan!

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niyati226 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-15 18:20:54 +0000 UTC]

well i do indeed

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cherno-alphas [2008-02-03 02:09:01 +0000 UTC]

clever and moving.

good poem

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ARTnoob In reply to cherno-alphas [2008-02-03 17:14:23 +0000 UTC]

I do what I can!

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LittleBitofsweetness [2008-01-31 20:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I like it.
A lot.
(=

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ARTnoob In reply to LittleBitofsweetness [2008-02-03 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
=]]

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TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-01-31 07:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem. I think it's a good job.


ps.I'd be glad if you let me be that person sitting with you...

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ARTnoob In reply to TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-01-31 19:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my dear.

=]]

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TomorrowIWasLoved In reply to ARTnoob [2008-02-03 23:11:31 +0000 UTC]

*gives a kiss on his cheek sitting with him*

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TomorrowIWasLoved In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-31 20:19:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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