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ARTnoob — His Nightmare by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-10-09 19:40:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description There he cried
Night after night
And he never knew
How to fight

The demons
The angels
The heavens
The hells
The good
The bad
The happy
The sad

There he died
Again and again
Upon his wake
It seemed to end

The demons
The angels
The heavens
The hells
The good
The bad
The happy
The sad

There he sighed
Day to day
In his bed
He would always lay

Waiting and waiting
Reading and writing
Never finding an answer
Every search with falter
Looking and looking
Closer and closer
And here he finds
His time

No peace
No soul
The mark of evil
A burden to hold

Goodbye to dreams
Goodbye to even hope it seems
Goodbye to you
You are my nightmare, untrue
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Comments: 8

BlueShadowM [2008-03-18 22:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Great! (As always)
Like the part with
The demons
The angels
The heavens...

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purplelining [2007-10-10 16:35:54 +0000 UTC]

very nicely written interesting concept as well

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LittleBitofsweetness [2007-10-09 21:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely brilliant.

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ARTnoob In reply to LittleBitofsweetness [2007-10-10 22:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly!

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bfo [2007-10-09 20:18:29 +0000 UTC]

wow, nice one, i like the part with the demons the angels .....

perfect

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ARTnoob In reply to bfo [2007-10-10 22:47:58 +0000 UTC]



Danka!

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bfo In reply to ARTnoob [2007-10-10 23:01:49 +0000 UTC]

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