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Published: 2007-12-29 07:48:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description This song,
is when I fall,
because of Blue Eyes
And when I fall I cry,
But for this song I try,
To let you know you tell nothing but lies

You are empty like a shallow pit
When I start thirty feet in the air
You are deep like an ocean
Too much pressure overbearing
You are vast like space
In that I never see life from here
You are like my Aunt Petunia
Who has mold growing in her ear
For you never really listen
And I try to make amends
But you show me no emotion
So you are why it ends
And as for feeling sorry
You fight me more oft then not
And when you hit me I fall to the floor
Into a shallow pit where I shall rot

And you are why my dear
Why I cry at night
And I must admit
Why I want to die

So cast your judgement
And cast your dice
I’m done with you
And your pretty blue eyes
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Comments: 12

CompulsiVeVerbalist [2007-12-30 11:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Cor..this is intense, it is a personal little journey..sad and beautiful. Not in the real sense of the word, as in the poetic notions conveyed in the language. i love the lines..
"You are like my Aunt Petunia
Who has mold growing in her ear"
Bravo.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-02 02:37:32 +0000 UTC]

I felt a Shel Silverstein approach was needed to get the story full of progression.

Thank you very much.
I'm glad you like it.


<3

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-02 17:18:49 +0000 UTC]

I know not this person...enlighten me...

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-02 20:47:11 +0000 UTC]

He writes poetry for children.
He uses whitty and for lack of better words... "stupid" lines to write short 4-20 line poems.

Look him up.

He's a good poet.

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-03 17:41:10 +0000 UTC]

I did, i love it. Am i pleased often by your influences. arent you the ani difranco dude?

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-03 18:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Huh?

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-04 11:04:19 +0000 UTC]

firstly, i am not am i.
Didnt you have something inspired by ani difranco? Or is that someone else?

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-04 21:02:21 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it was me.

I don't know Ani Difranco

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-05 13:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. Very interesting. And...quite worrying...am i losing my mind now dear?

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-06 20:38:53 +0000 UTC]

If you are, join the club.
We meet on Tuesdays and Fridays.
Fridays are wacky hat day, so uh... Wear a crazy hat!

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-06 20:42:06 +0000 UTC]

My hair is a crazy hat dude...seriously. I will just shape it as required. And perhaps add a teapot of some description.

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xXKurse10Xx [2007-12-29 15:58:07 +0000 UTC]

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