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ARTnoob — If Only Rage Were A Song
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Published: 2008-03-04 00:57:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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He never makes it past itHe always freaks out
He starts to cry on the inside
Then he starts to shout
His walls are bruised
Along with his knuckles
And they seem to be bleeding
While his legs buckle
He thinks he’s crazy
He’s so insecure
So why is he staring
At it over and over
He knows what makes like this
He knows what makes him mad
He knows what he is feeling
But isn’t it just sad
He has control over only his voice
Where the wall doesn’t yell back
He keeps unwillingly punching
He will never stop his attack
He fights until his arms are weak
He fights until he drops
I think I’ll always be this angry
Until my heart may stop…
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Comments: 6
I hope you understand what I meant at least a little...
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First thing Cliff... You write waaaay too fast 
I like this poem, especially that you use "he" talking about your own, real feelings and emotions (I suppose they are yours). Like you were outside of your mind or/and body describing what you can see, describing the way you view HIM (yourself).
You observe yourself from outside but on the end you get to conclusion and you "come back to yourself" using "I".
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I do understand what you mean...
And I meant for it to be this way.
I actually see my life this way sometimes, so...
Yeah, remember, Dissociative Identity Disorder... Look it up on the net.
Read about it.
LoL
It's kinda interesting.
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You would be surprised by how familiar it sounds/is to me
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