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Published: 2007-10-15 02:48:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 947; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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I feel inhuman as the world and its decietful ways are coming full round and completing its own destructive path.I stand in the wake of confusion and perplexity, contemptuosity and natural justice.
I am one of many in a web of lies, while others are in a lie of my own.
We see the world as cruel and unfair, yet it is, at base, a true satisfaction of vengeance and retribution.
What is more equal than an eye for an eye, a limb for a limb, or a heart for a heart?
Life for a life, one would say, may be an overbearing circumstance, but it will when divided show relevance to death.
We all lie, and we all cheat, while we all tell the truth, and we all play by the rules.
There is no way to deny the inescapable fact that we are human, mortal, evil, and in itself, deaths own reasoning.
We die for one reason... If we were allowed to live forever, we would not overpopulate, but die of extinction.
No explanation for this conclusion is necessary, because if one were to ponder there own life and why they have taken their own path, they will see that humans, by nature, grow to inherit power.
Power overwhelmingly creates madness for more power.
A delusion inescapable since the dawn of time.
Man found fire and became enthralled, and fought with it.
Man found wheel and used it to create war machines.
Man found electricity and used it to power these all.
Man found science, and with this science, we will soon become a test tube for expirimentation.
Man found God, and killed for those who did not believe.
Man found redemption, and threw it aside in clothes of a poor man.
Man found greed within himself, and from that the cycle of power continues.
Why do I feel inhuman?
Inhumanity is to question the mundane.
The mundane is day to day, without falter, it happens in repitition and patterns surrounding mystery.
The mundane angers me as it is scripted by those around us, as we ourselves infuence another's own act.
Their act shall play onto another emotion and it will trigger another circle.
We will not escape being human.
For we are human.
I am human.
You are human.
That is the way it is.
There is no substitute.
We are the same.
You cannot deny my logic.
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Comments: 15
existence is a question mark for me, the thought of spending your life doing nothing only waiting for death is hard to process for me, but now i'm starting to think, about religion and how someone could just make up one religion and just follow it, and sometimes It's puzzling to think about it and just know that maybe none of this is even real.
good work though I love it.
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This is amazing. Mind if I feature it in my journal? You've got such talent. Like wow. And I love the perspective you put this in. Best thing I've read in a LONG time. Just when I was starting to give up on dA's literature.
Do we even know what feeling human is like anymore? We have all of this emotion, thoughts and decisions. They cloud our vision. When we know what we believe, we're shot down. So faith his something that comes and goes. We're all the same. We're all what we are whether we feel it or not. Whether we like it or not.
It's sad, really.
Because sometimes I think we all want to be a little better than human.
A step up on the latter.
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Thank you very much for the gracious compliment.
I'm glad I put perseverance into you to keep reading dA lit.
I plan on putting up more in the future, so you might want to check every month or so.
And of course you may feature it.
I love to get my word out there.
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eric these are exactly the words i needed to decribe humans and life, because i am not literate enough to express what you have said im am so greatful and it shows you have carefully thought through what you wished to say
its brilliant, and i will certainly pass it on so everyone can read it
have you ever read the book ' the god delusion'
its brilliant and makes some good points about religion
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have you ever seen the movie "the devil's advocate"?
something you say is quite similar...
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please... read all of the story to understand what i mean 
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beautiful, really. you do wonders with words, and you made me think of things id never considered before.
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That is what I hope for.
Indeed what I hope for.
I want to encourage people to think beyond their existence.
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I agree with this, partially. But since I tend to be a tiny bit optimistic sometimes, I also disagree with it partially. But it's your opinion and your point of view, and you've stated it very well.
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its very good and well thought out that is for sure with some very interesting points raised, i guess it will always be one of those big questions that will never be answered are humans inhuman/inatley(sp?) evil.
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I really don't know what to say to this one, I usually have a praise or a comment.
But maybe it's my way of thinking that is stopping me. Mostly likely since I always see the good side of people, or hope for a good side and then get hurt because I expect more from that human.
But I can't deny that part of this is right, people lie, cheat and tell the truth. Yet which is the truth and which is a lie?
For some reason I want to understand the reason for this kind of thinking.
But since i'm just 16 and want to cure the world of madness blah.
It is good though, but idk...
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