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ARTnoob — It Was Never Meant To Be
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Published: 2008-09-26 04:50:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Here I am underwaterTrying to fight the undertow
You’re the face that flashes forward
As I feel my hands let go
The waters rushing in
My lungs are drowning out
I wish I’d said I love you
But it’s way too late now
And when I was ashore
I hope you see my pain
Because otherwise
My suicide would be in vain
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Comments: 13
you could really turn this into a song.
add more words and more thoughts to it though. its good already but it could be better.
-threm. it isnt obvious i love reading your work?
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Thank goodness someone is finally criticizing my work.
And honestly, the way I write, when I get to writing, the words keep coming.
I'm like a short-epic writing Homer
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haha. I'm a literary editor at my school paper that's why i criticize.
born poet.
-threm.
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i mean, you're a born poet.
-threm
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Yeah, you know me.
I tend to be a bit lyrical.
I end up singing the words before I write them in most cases.
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