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ARTnoob — No Time For Rhyme by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-08-09 01:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Feelin' the vibe
Fiber eatin'
With sugar coated
Flaky treats

Noddin' my head
Music playin'
Chillin' out
Beat beat beat

Fingers typin'
No control
It's all good
They know where they're goin'

Shivers down my spine
Long day
Cool night
Time for layin' down

Layin' down nothing
But simple words
Feelin' rhythm
Without purpose or rhyme

La da dee da dee doo
It's how it goes
It's what I do
Shrugs the shoulders

It's all whatever
Water drinkin'
Chair seatin'
Relaxation
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Comments: 7

CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-08-09 19:05:06 +0000 UTC]

i like this.. rhyming clearly isnt essential hey, this works very well, still flows nicely.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-08-10 02:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
=]]

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twilight-woods [2008-08-09 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]

You didn't rhyme!!!

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-09 13:09:29 +0000 UTC]

I know.!!.
It's like a quantum flux.!!.

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-09 19:19:48 +0000 UTC]

lol

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random-kumquats [2008-08-09 02:01:04 +0000 UTC]

seems very random . . . kind of like a boredom poem

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ARTnoob In reply to random-kumquats [2008-08-09 03:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much.

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