KiKi-Chan94 [2010-09-26 21:03:17 +0000 UTC]

very short and sweet, it reminds me of when im sad. i never can stay sad for a day ( im not kidding either) but i do tend to get a lil melancholy.


Reading this reminded me
Of what sad people need to see
When they're looking down.
At the ground.
And stumbling over thier feet.


you are the best poet i know so far,
keep making poems, wherever you are.

^^,
Seeking

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purplelining [2007-09-21 20:08:10 +0000 UTC]

I agree you are getting better each time you right, I love the imagery and optimism in this

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choppersrule [2007-09-21 16:15:34 +0000 UTC]

WOW a photographer and a poet!!!! lol amazing!!!

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