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ARTnoob — Past and Passed
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Published: 2008-04-19 08:14:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Her fingers scratch and harm my dexterityThey weaken my course to discourse
They whither my rugged digits
As they write a word of another sentence
They punish and blame me for heartache
For utter shame
How can I suffer quietly
How can I be the blame
So much mourning for a mistake long past
So much for a morning long since passed
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Comments: 9
Ooh! Me gusta mucho! (I wish I knew how to make the upside-down question mark) Your style is similar to mine; you mess around with spelling, dual meanings, figures of speech, and puns. You know, all that jazz. But hey, doesn't it just sound so clever! LOL
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Tee hee! That made me giggle!
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I love the word play. It has a really cool effect. :]
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i enjoyed this, i love how it ends. it gives it a thump. The only thing i am vaguely put off by is the repetition of fingers so soon in the first couple of stanzawotsits.
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Sorry, I should change it to rugged digits.
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