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ARTnoob — Possibly Nature's Nurture by-nc-nd
Published: 2007-08-01 18:21:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description For the man walked down the street
The papers clung to him like a fire
A fire living on pain and scorn
No way the man could leave his heart torn

The wind blew dirt into his eyes
And the ground broke uneven to impede his path
His legs were tangled by vines
Telling him to go back

On the wind carried a bird
It perched upon his shoulder
It whispered in his ear
Go back and tell her you love her

The man took another step
The ground opened beneath him
He fell into Hell and couldn't grab hold
He was doomed now to keep on slipping

A hand grabbed his own
A sister, a friend
A simple embrace
I love you too...
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Comments: 8

LittleBitofsweetness [2007-08-09 19:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Very beautifully written. I was in a trance for a minute.

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ARTnoob In reply to LittleBitofsweetness [2007-08-09 19:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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silvernightwolf [2007-08-02 22:16:56 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It was done really well. I like the imagery and the way it flows. It was done beautifully.

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ARTnoob In reply to silvernightwolf [2007-08-08 01:27:23 +0000 UTC]

I do what I can.
Thank you very much.

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silvernightwolf In reply to ARTnoob [2007-08-08 01:42:27 +0000 UTC]

No problem. It was really great!

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purplelining [2007-08-01 19:24:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it, the imagery is nicely done as well

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ARTnoob In reply to purplelining [2007-08-08 01:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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purplelining In reply to ARTnoob [2007-08-08 09:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome

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