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Crystal laden fieldsLike massive towers
Black skies and white ground
Walking my own purgatory
No sound can be heard
Only the endless echo of my own voice
No sun can be seen
Only the imagined glimmer of the spires
Clean jutting shards
Purple and fuchsia guardians
Keeping a watchful eye
Over a lonely soul
No end to the flat ground
No horizon
No time is passed
No past to remember
This is my heaven
This is my hell
Left with my thoughts
In this never ending spell
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Comments: 13
Reluctanthero27 [2009-01-14 03:42:54 +0000 UTC]
I really like the line " this is my heaven, this is my hell". I feel like that about my life every day.
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ARTnoob In reply to Reluctanthero27 [2009-01-17 05:12:18 +0000 UTC]
I am sorry to hear that you understand.
But hope is reluctant.
=]]
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twilight-woods [2008-08-29 03:35:42 +0000 UTC]
O.O It sounds barren, like you wrote. Sort of a quiet place where everything kind of smoulders even though the air is really dry. Electric?
I've only died in dreams. What does it feel like?
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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-31 02:03:47 +0000 UTC]
All I remember is, waking up standing.
And that's all it was.
I couldn't feel cold, warmth.
Nothing.
Very nothing.
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BlueShadowM [2008-08-28 17:42:01 +0000 UTC]
You have been dead twice? What happend?
Sounds like a rather nice place though.
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ARTnoob In reply to BlueShadowM [2008-08-28 18:43:03 +0000 UTC]
Overdose once.
107 degree temperature shutting down my body systems.
And really...
It's nothing.
Literally.
There's nothing there.
And being by myself with my thoughts...
Not the best place to be.
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BlueShadowM In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-30 18:26:34 +0000 UTC]
Okay, maybe not, but it was so beautifully described.
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BlueShadowM [2008-08-28 17:40:41 +0000 UTC]
You have been dead twice? What happend?
Sounds lika a rather nice place though.
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