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ARTnoob — Simple Night, Tragic Ending
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Published: 2007-09-24 20:13:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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It was a simple boyWho met a simple girl
He never really knew
How to act out in the world
So one night
The boy and girl met
The never knew
It would turn into regret
He never stole from anyone
Or tried to take away
But this seemingly simple night
Slowly went astray
The boy was thinking
This is great
Random meeting
Perfect place
But woah unto him
Would he soon find out
He couldn't take his liquor
And he fell down and out
Much to his surprise
He awoke in the morning
No recollection of the night
Yet his mind was soaring
He sat in bed
For about an hour
Thinking what he might have done
Soon his mind went sour
A faint taste of bile
Lingered on his tongue
What could I have done
What could have gone wrong
He to this day
Cannot recall
Anything of the night
What happened at all
So he went from there
Knowing his own problem
And to this day he swears
He knows he's hit the bottom
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Comments: 5
So sad, definitely lost... *sighs*
Tragic and true at the same time - life for ya...
Question:
Do you write from personal experience (if you don't, you could have fooled me - not a bad thing, but you have the convincing touch with your words), or is this a "watch others fall from grace" kind of bit?
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Every piece has some experience.
Every piece.
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kk, that's sad (truth normally is) - makes a body turn mournful at points... but i guess it's life. you have the good and the bad, and wouldn't give any of it up for anything.
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Very nicely written the emotion really shows through in the writing
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wow, i must say i missed your songs, i read them all, this one i so, well i don't know i get i don't know cant describe the felling , but to tell you the truth i have hit the bottom 2 times so it hurts, but you must start all over again!
"scorpion sensitive one...."
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