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ARTnoob — Such A Good Change
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Published: 2011-10-27 01:02:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 149; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Her name is such a shock to culture nearly splits my headHer beauty is so astounding, damn near struck me dead
Her practical, do good, aggressive tones make it all seem too unreal
Yet there's that pull on my heart strings telling me to feel
Such thought goes on behind your eyes dashing left to right
Sometimes I wonder what you're thinking whilst sleeping at night
I've come to yearn your sight when the dawn breaks far too soon
Waking up with you in my arms sings the perfect tune
To feel your hand, 'gainst my cheek
Hath provided query so
Doth thou protest to love
Or shall we dance, to and fro
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I really am hating you right now. You've always written amazing things. I love how you start out with a sort of modern tone and wording. Kind of reminds me of a skater for some reason. I think it's because of the phrase "Split my head". And then you the last part is like super old school wording. And I feel the middle really helps kind of transition those two things together. Modern, transition, old school.
I applaud you my good sir! Yet want to stab you at the same time lol.
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Well as you say yourself.... I'm a lover not a fighter.... Words are my weapons.........
Wait... I suppose it makes me violent either way.
By the way, I sleep with the cover 'alf drawn, so my back'd be exposed....
Feel free to take the strike.
Sorry again.
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Lmao first I was like "How does he know I have a back fetish?" I had ro reread that to understand lol.
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