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ARTnoob — The Bottom of The Bottle by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-01-09 16:15:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I look in the mirror, and what do I see
A lost little child, with nowhere to be
He's dazed and confused
Lost in a world
Not like his own
Upon which he swirls
His mind races with thoughts, dark and bleek
His eyes see things, that make him weak

Down another bottle, down to the bottom
Where he resides, as he drinks them

As my father once told, I wish I were a duck,
And if the ocean were whiskey... I'd drink...
And never come up.
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Comments: 8

Punq [2008-01-27 09:55:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah man, thats real, thats cool, good stuff.

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ARTnoob In reply to Punq [2008-01-28 00:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you graciously.

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caseyR [2008-01-17 07:10:03 +0000 UTC]

wow thats really good! powerful words

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ARTnoob In reply to caseyR [2008-01-17 21:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

=]]
<33

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caseyR In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-18 02:45:04 +0000 UTC]

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-09 16:52:00 +0000 UTC]

It is, i love the last verse! This is great! p.s "bleak not bleek"
Great work!

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-09 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you for the spelling correction.
And thanks for the rest of the comment.
=]]

Yeah, as for the last verse, I thought it was needed.
<3

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-10 12:32:10 +0000 UTC]

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