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Published: 2008-01-09 16:15:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I look in the mirror, and what do I seeA lost little child, with nowhere to be
He's dazed and confused
Lost in a world
Not like his own
Upon which he swirls
His mind races with thoughts, dark and bleek
His eyes see things, that make him weak
Down another bottle, down to the bottom
Where he resides, as he drinks them
As my father once told, I wish I were a duck,
And if the ocean were whiskey... I'd drink...
And never come up.
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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-09 16:52:00 +0000 UTC]
It is, i love the last verse! This is great! p.s "bleak not bleek"
Great work!
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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-09 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you for the spelling correction.
And thanks for the rest of the comment.
=]]
Yeah, as for the last verse, I thought it was needed.
<3
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