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ARTnoob — The Chapter Ends by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-08-26 01:55:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description A brief stint in a very short chapter.
Not sure how to word the last few lines.
I don't want this plot to end but it's going down in flames in my head.

The pages will drip with tears.
If not her story then mine.

Oh what a cursed web I weave.

I should have expected this twist.
The phrases to jump off the page and run.

It's lonely waiting for the words after the comma...
But they never come.

These last few lines...
I have no idea how to word them.
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ps-threm [2009-01-31 09:24:41 +0000 UTC]

"A brief stint in a very short chapter.
Not sure how to word the last few lines.
I don't want this plot to end but it's going down in flames in my head."

love this.

-threm. how about ending it with one bittersweet goodbye? hahaha..

cheer up.

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ARTnoob In reply to ps-threm [2009-02-02 05:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you.

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bfo [2008-08-27 06:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Like this part so much, "It's lonely waiting for the words after the comma..." no comment just one! Nice poem!

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ARTnoob In reply to bfo [2008-08-27 22:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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BabyLy [2008-08-26 13:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Awww...It's so sweet and lonely

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twilight-woods [2008-08-26 04:11:18 +0000 UTC]

It's a lonely poem.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-27 03:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.
=//

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-27 03:55:54 +0000 UTC]

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-27 22:53:11 +0000 UTC]

It's okay.
=]]

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-28 05:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Good.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-27 22:53:10 +0000 UTC]

It's okay.
=]]

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