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ARTnoob — The Forest Sanctuary For Her by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-03-03 16:01:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 244; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description Here in the misty forest is where I start my scene
A picture held in my mind which I’ve never seen
A light shines through a tree in a clearing
Where light yellow and orange leaves are sleeping
You see the beams of light through the arms of the tree
Which are twisted, wicked as such it cannot possibly be
A flurry of leaves brought up in a gust of air
Makes you notice her slender face standing there
A beam of light curves around her soft cheek
You see her true beauty but dare not speak
She is kneeling on the ground in her sanctuary
Praying to her God and her Mother Mary
The forest seem s to be so serene
In this place where I set my scene
In the middle of a thick forest where this tree lies
No life for miles and miles and miles
She will keep kneeling here praying for on her own
Will anyone find her and keep her from being alone

This tree is a shrine in the middle of nature
And with this girl the tree will nurture
Her thoughts and her stories, her prayers and wishes
Until the day that comes when she finishes
Leave her in her white dress
With leaves strewn about
Nothing could be more beautiful
One should not even have to doubt
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Comments: 15

TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-03-03 21:57:27 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful Cliff.
The way you describe things you imagine tells about you a lot I think...

And these two lines
"She will keep kneeling here praying for on her own
Will anyone find her and keep her from being alone" remind me of what I once wrote:
"Only God can see me
falling asleep with a prayer on my lips".

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ARTnoob In reply to TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-03-04 00:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Malvina.
<3

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TomorrowIWasLoved In reply to ARTnoob [2008-03-04 00:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Don't thank me Cliff. Just keep on good job!

for it or even And if I could, I would give you

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ARTnoob In reply to TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-03-04 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]

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TomorrowIWasLoved In reply to ARTnoob [2008-03-04 01:50:13 +0000 UTC]

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faeryswornnymph [2008-03-03 21:43:02 +0000 UTC]

If your words were to be considered "picture quality",
then this should be classified as crystal clear.
beautiful - very sweet...

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ARTnoob In reply to faeryswornnymph [2008-03-04 00:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

I try.

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faeryswornnymph In reply to ARTnoob [2008-03-04 16:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome - and you can tell.
As my 'bff' would call it... "prettiful".

lol

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faeryswornnymph In reply to faeryswornnymph [2008-03-04 19:59:42 +0000 UTC]

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ARTnoob In reply to faeryswornnymph [2008-03-04 18:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you again.

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faeryswornnymph In reply to ARTnoob [2008-03-04 20:00:18 +0000 UTC]

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EccoGirl [2008-03-03 18:49:16 +0000 UTC]

your very good at discribing, I could see it very clearly in my head^_^

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ARTnoob In reply to EccoGirl [2008-03-04 00:03:46 +0000 UTC]

I do my best to describe what I think of.

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CabernetBard [2008-03-03 16:24:44 +0000 UTC]

I love this one =] One of your best, that I've read anyway ^^

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ARTnoob In reply to CabernetBard [2008-03-03 17:12:59 +0000 UTC]

YaY!

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