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Published: 2008-01-28 00:52:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description There is no fire, but the skies,
As I look with my white and blue eyes,
It makes me smile and justly so,
I swear to you, I can’t let go,
My gaze is fixed upon the clouds,
Swirling into and all around,
It makes me smile, and laugh with glee,
For I can only hope and see,
The sky will turn a darker red,
And soon, it will be completely dead,
Dotted here and there with giant stars light years away,
I don’t know how or what to say,
It’s beautiful you see,
It makes me happy,
And I believe,
This is me,
In my perfect sensibility,
It leaves me hopeful,
For artistic opportunity,
And I look and look and look,
And I will always find,
Simple quiet,
Simple peace,
As the voices go into the sky,
And all things, are right with me
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Comments: 4

TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-01-28 10:01:26 +0000 UTC]

And I like a lot that you said about the skies in plural...

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TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-01-28 09:59:22 +0000 UTC]

"...Dotted here and there with giant stars light years away,
I don’t know how or what to say,
It’s beautiful you see,
It makes me happy,
And I believe,
This is me,
In my perfect sensibility,
It leaves me hopeful,
For artistic opportunity,
And I look and look and look,
And I will always find,
Simple quiet,
Simple peace..."

These lines are really beautiful. In my mind, pretty simple but intense and full of feelings...

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elisiabattell [2008-01-28 02:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Pretty poem. I love it. :] <3

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ARTnoob In reply to elisiabattell [2008-01-28 08:01:54 +0000 UTC]

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