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Published: 2008-08-13 02:03:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 126; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Feeling loose on life
Like an alcoholics grip on whiskey
Feeling close to light
Like a blind bat in a cavern
Feeling clean in mind
Like a crack addict on Marijuana
Feeling clear in purpose
Like a new president on economics

Maybe there's no real definition to reality
Like a definition for extravagance
Maybe there's no hold on reality
Like a wormhole in cyberspace
Maybe there's no time for reality
Like a bum with a Rolex
Maybe there's no way out of reality
Like a narcissist stuck in a dream

Touching water in a pond
Like an astronaut touching the moon
Touching fire in a forest
Like a bear swatting salmon
Touching earth on a mountain
Like a child playing with his rattle
Touching wind in the air
Like a soldier firing his gun in a battle

What is life and reality
When there is no cause for rationality
What is dreaming when you are awake
When you can't sleep near the dawn of a new day
What is passion and trust
When there is no truth in lust
What is kissing lips that aren't even there
When you're trying to make it seem like you care

There is no point but reality
A point on a pen, stuck on a simile
There is no point for senseless life
When you end at the end of a long dull knife
There is no point for telling a lie
A point you try to make when you're about to die
There is no point but life or death
So grab another crack pipe or some crystal meth

Singing a lonely song
Will only aggravate your need more
Dancing a shameless waltz
Will only make you bleed more
Acting a part on a movie screen
Will only take you to a new beginning
Playing a woodsoaked violin
Will only violate your mortal sin

This has no point but reality
This has no point but rationality
This has no point but volatility
This has no point but relativity

Stop acting on impulse
Emulsify your being through emotion
Create something unique
Like a human in the ocean

So many meanings to life
To little reasons for carrying on
Looking up only makes you feel lonely
Looking down only makes you blind

Reading every line of a new book
Like watching sports in a foreign country
Speaking every word of a new theory
Like it's your own tragic life story

Go
Stop
Take a turn
Watch
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Comments: 12

ps-threm [2009-01-31 10:07:50 +0000 UTC]

ever considered adding harmony?

this is one good work.

-threm

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ARTnoob In reply to ps-threm [2009-02-02 05:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Some I feel need to have it, but this one was more of a flow writing.
I wrote it in one continuous flow.

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ps-threm In reply to ARTnoob [2009-02-02 11:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice. you're good at this dude.

-threm.

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ARTnoob In reply to ps-threm [2009-02-03 00:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well I do my best.

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ps-threm In reply to ARTnoob [2009-02-05 12:41:33 +0000 UTC]

obviously.

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twilight-woods [2008-08-13 02:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh...this feels good.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-14 01:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

To be quite honest... I just jumped into writing it.
No prior thought or inspiration.
You can tell the style/motion changed after the first block of lines...
Yeah... Thank goodness I'm good at this whole... writing thing, lol.

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-14 02:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Just jumping into something generally yields the best work. If you think too much you'll find flaws, just run with it until you're out of breath.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-14 02:40:17 +0000 UTC]

And this one was like running a Marathon.

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-14 06:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Reads like it

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-08-14 16:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...
*rubs back of neck*
It's a little long, lol.

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-15 04:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but that's not bad.

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