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ARTnoob — These Drunk Days by-nc-nd

Published: 2008-01-05 01:44:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description "These drunk days are slurred
And I sit here alone
Wondering how it will be
If I'll even make it on my own"
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Comments: 8

sophieoh [2011-06-26 08:13:26 +0000 UTC]

<3

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-05 17:24:59 +0000 UTC]

This is very powerful.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-06 20:41:25 +0000 UTC]

That's what I hoped for.
I wanted me to be blurry to show I feel... "faded".

=]]

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-06 20:50:51 +0000 UTC]

It works. Like we are seeing the physical effects of the "drunkenness" not only in the drunk sense either, like, in the broken sense too, if that makes sense. You have done well.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-01-08 16:41:06 +0000 UTC]

After removing all the E's and S's I feel I can grasp the concept.



And thank you!

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CompulsiVeVerbalist In reply to ARTnoob [2008-01-08 20:16:09 +0000 UTC]

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shatteryourindra [2008-01-05 01:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I really like this.

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ARTnoob In reply to shatteryourindra [2008-01-05 01:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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