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ARTnoob — This Girl I Adore by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-08-20 04:57:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description This song is for a girl
To me she means the world
And into love I'm hurled
And when we dance we twirl

'Cuz babe I love your hair
And the pretty clothes you wear
I can't help but stare
Babe I really care

Your hugs are tender
But passion tight
And with your kiss
I feel so light

And when you lay in my arms
I'll keep you from harm
And as we drift to sleep
It almost makes me weep

Tonight comes the dream
Where you are my queen
In a world where it seems
You rule my dreams

My mouth could sputter words
For hours about her eyes
And how they steal my breath
How my tongue would tie

She's the magma in my core
Keeps me burning for more
And it's true that I adore
This girl evermore
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Comments: 7

mandachele [2008-09-03 07:48:37 +0000 UTC]

havent heard something like this in a while.
a lot of people forget the sweet side of rhythm and rhyming.

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ARTnoob In reply to mandachele [2008-09-03 08:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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mandachele In reply to ARTnoob [2008-09-03 08:02:52 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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BabyLy [2008-08-20 12:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Awww...Sweet,very sweet...I wish my bf wrote me something like this -_-

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christyhedgehog [2008-08-20 05:00:15 +0000 UTC]

this is rlly adorable, it reminds me of the poetry someone used to write me

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ARTnoob In reply to christyhedgehog [2008-08-20 05:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I'm sorry to hear the "used to" notation.

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christyhedgehog In reply to ARTnoob [2008-08-21 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]

ehh its ok, getting over it

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