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ARTnoob — This Night by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-07-23 02:31:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 226; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description With a long-drawn sigh
I look into the night sky
And I see the stars
We once saw together
We held our hands in a familiar pose
And our bodies were close
And our breathing intertwined
It was all calm as a cool breeze
Bustled past the grass
To meet our cheeks
I smiled and turned to you
To see your gentle frame
And your eyes so affixed
To the galaxies so far away
It was soft and serene
So quiet like a dream

You turned to me
And I saw your eyes
They were like blue stars
Brighter than any sun
Light years away

You were so near to me
I could hear your heartbeat
And it was a metronome of peace
And it lulled me close to sleep
You lips curved malevolently
And the security of your kiss
Was followed by subtle whisper
A sweet nothing meant the world to me
And your sweet smell meant everything

Oh, this night, I thought
Was beautiful, and calm
And you were an angel
So quaint but strong
This will never fade
From my chaotic mind
As this peaceful night
Will live on, and on, and on
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Comments: 13

ps-threm [2009-01-31 10:12:41 +0000 UTC]

i've added too many comments already.

i can't help it, you're so good at this!

-threm

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ARTnoob In reply to ps-threm [2009-02-02 05:11:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha well I am flattered.

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ps-threm In reply to ARTnoob [2009-02-02 11:03:50 +0000 UTC]

PSSH.

you're supposed to.

-threm.

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xXCinderemoXx [2008-07-23 15:16:14 +0000 UTC]

God that's beautfiul...
Amazing rhythm and everything

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ARTnoob In reply to xXCinderemoXx [2008-07-23 17:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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xXCinderemoXx In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-23 18:20:50 +0000 UTC]

^^

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-07-23 08:16:29 +0000 UTC]

oh. a lot.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-07-23 17:34:29 +0000 UTC]

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jexxvous08 [2008-07-23 03:48:19 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, eric
you can tell it really meant something to you
i love this
<3
your words are addictive.

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ARTnoob In reply to jexxvous08 [2008-07-23 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]

<33

Thanks babe.

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jexxvous08 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-23 18:36:37 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, hunn.
<3

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elisiabattell [2008-07-23 02:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I think I might just love you.

Gah. this rocked.

And crazy mesmerized when it comes to anything astronomy.

<333 Ahmaziing.

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ARTnoob In reply to elisiabattell [2008-07-23 02:44:36 +0000 UTC]

YAY.!!.


<33

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