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Published: 2008-05-21 07:03:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 245; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description She crossed my mind just now
She left a wake of beautiful things
A meadow of flowers, daisies and daffodils
With a soft breeze on my cheek

I can almost remember her smile
I can almost remember her voice
As the sound carried on by the wind
Lives in my heart and mind

My tears don’t hurt like they used to
They just long for her fingers to brush them away
And my eyes can only clench so hard
As I stifle the whimpering

She’s so beautiful
I swear to God she is
I would give the world all I can
If I could just see her smile once more

These now salt stained cheeks were once hers to kiss
As they perked from sheer excitement
And even now my lips curve slightly but weakly
Thinking of her… Just simply her

She left a wake of beautiful things
And those things I swear I’ll hold
I will hold them until I die
Happy, wrinkled, and old
And though she won’t be by my side
I swear to God
In heaven she’ll be my bride…

I miss you…
And love you…
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Comments: 13

twilight-woods [2008-05-22 22:06:53 +0000 UTC]

"She’s so beautiful
I swear to God she is"

Good line.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-05-23 00:27:27 +0000 UTC]

P.S.: As in, I would love her God to go to Heaven for her.

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twilight-woods In reply to ARTnoob [2008-05-23 04:56:42 +0000 UTC]

It's a beautiful thought.

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2008-05-23 00:26:40 +0000 UTC]

It is, I'm a Buddhist.
It shows at least to myself how much she meant.

=]]

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TomorrowIWasLoved [2008-05-22 20:14:06 +0000 UTC]

I wish someone loved me like this...

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BlueShadowM [2008-05-21 17:51:11 +0000 UTC]

It's really beautiful and sad. I like it very much.

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ARTnoob In reply to BlueShadowM [2008-05-21 18:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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BlueShadowM In reply to ARTnoob [2008-05-21 18:33:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-05-21 10:47:43 +0000 UTC]

oh man, not again.. this is too lovely... to devastating.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-05-21 18:23:22 +0000 UTC]

=//

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caseyR [2008-05-21 07:58:33 +0000 UTC]

that's deep man lol i mean that in a good way, it's a beautiful piece of writting

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ARTnoob In reply to caseyR [2008-05-21 18:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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caseyR In reply to ARTnoob [2008-05-21 21:40:12 +0000 UTC]

that's ok

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