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ARTnoob — Waves Of Bliss by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-08-20 08:16:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Every instance
In the instant
When I walked
A thin line...
I came upon
A theater
Shining bright
In the sky...
It opened up
It's pearly doors
And sat me in
A seat for me...
Oh how great
It was to see
The things upon
The screen...

Oh the movies
Of serpentine
Delusional
Psychotic drama...
Oh the songs
That set the drop
Much like
The Dalai Lama...
And in the film
I play myself
And fill the part
So full...
Oh much
It made real life
Seem so
Very dull...

To the credits
I watched it scroll
As the names
came and went...
So much time
Two hours and so
Was watched
With great content...
And at the end
Before it went
Up to nothing
Black and then...
I came on
And said aloud
I see the future...
Good again...
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Comments: 6

bonefiedarts [2010-05-15 23:47:47 +0000 UTC]

That's (looking for the word) awesome!!! I love how you write!
-Hunter

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ARTnoob In reply to bonefiedarts [2010-09-15 23:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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twilight-woods [2009-08-20 17:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Nice^^

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ARTnoob In reply to twilight-woods [2009-08-20 19:09:01 +0000 UTC]

YaY.!!.

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2009-08-20 12:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Like it, like it alot.

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ARTnoob In reply to CompulsiVeVerbalist [2009-08-20 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear.

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