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ARTnoob — Whispers by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-02-19 06:34:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description They sounded much like whispers
Being spoken to my ear
I loved the things they said
So crisply neat and clear
They told me of the life
I so badly want to live
And they told me to take
And to never ever give
They whispered on and on
To the songs inside my head
Much like a story
One that I have read
My ears twitched to the tune
As they turned to scratching nails
Like a crashing boat
Filled with broken sails
It came upon my sense
With a fury of a hell
And in my mind I knew
... I would not be well
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Comments: 2

Bienheureux [2009-03-18 21:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry really moves me.
I'm speechless.

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ARTnoob In reply to Bienheureux [2009-03-18 22:44:33 +0000 UTC]

I certainly try my best, and it is always good to know that other can understand the emotion.

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