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Published: 2005-10-10 02:51:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 37; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I can see everything... i dream of holding you, and kissing you... i can see the future.. i can see you smile... i can see it, but it wont happen... you are good for me... you are perfect for me... like you said, we would make a wonderful couple... i wont ever leave your side unless you demand me too... and even then i will never get over youI love you too much... if it wasnt for you, I never would have seen the light of day
if you cry
I would kiss your tears
with the side of my fingers and would die of happiness...
I love you too much... i dont think i could breathe without hearing your voice every day for the rest of my life
A day without you, is barely worth living... and to wait for the morning to hear your voice i will love and cry and hold and die as i slip to slumber in your arms and dream of life to be your one...
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Comments: 4
BlueShadowM [2008-03-18 13:44:45 +0000 UTC]
It's really beautiful. Makes me a little sad to read.
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ARTnoob In reply to BlueShadowM [2008-03-18 15:29:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I wrote this a long time ago.
I'm glad you found it.
And thank you.
=]]
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BlueShadowM In reply to ARTnoob [2008-03-19 13:39:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome It's still good even if it's old
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KissAndBreakDown [2005-10-10 19:37:07 +0000 UTC]
Very heartfelt, but I feel there is an overuse of elipses here.
And I think it's prose, not poetry.
Still, very touching.
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