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Published: 2007-06-23 17:37:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Yesterday it was a blurYour face passed by
Many times
And yet I never knew it was you
You always had me thinking
I had a chance
I could grab hold
And hold as tight as I could
But now I see
Oh fortune's fury
Fate does not see
You and I together
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Comments: 6
Dashes182 [2007-09-20 06:05:09 +0000 UTC]
This is a very good little pack of words here.
I love it.
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xXKurse10Xx [2007-06-26 14:04:23 +0000 UTC]
It's weird how things like that happen, how one day we don't see things at all and then the next they are right there.
I like the poem, I mean a person who knows how one sided love feels, or someone who knows they will never have a chance with that person could relate to this.
Or people who don't live their lives, those who just kind of pass through life.
Anyways, very good, bravo.
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purplelining [2007-06-23 21:51:16 +0000 UTC]
very nicely written im not sure what makes me like it but something really grabs me with it, maybe its the fact we can all identify with that one way or another
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bfo [2007-06-23 17:40:45 +0000 UTC]
i ann not agree more! my yesterday was a mess! it happened yust like in this poem! damn life hates me! I wish to die! i love her so much! she said could we yust be friends!
"brokenheart"
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