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Published: 2008-07-24 03:48:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description The words strewn across the screen
You make it seem
Dire, consequential.

No faulty mimic of pain or hurt
You alive aren't you?
Can it be that bad.

Hold yourself and look inside
You're alive
And though it seems pointless
You are alive

Would you throw away
You're own emotions
For a sense of being calm and rational

Or would you hold close and dear
What you know
What you hear

Just mouth the words
You love yourself
And though at first it seems a lie
There's no point
For you to die

Break it down
Beat it with a hammer
Hate it, scorn it
Mourn it
Deliver it to the devil yourself
And tell him to kiss your shoes

Tempt fate
When it's love
Tempt heaven
That you have on Earth
What you get from above

Keep it
Don't lament it
You're alive
You strive

Beat the curse
The wicked purse
Full of black lipstick
Quarters for sticks of death

No pain
No suffering
You're alive

Would you throw what you have
When all they have
Is what you don't want
While they push up daisies

Love
Pain
They go together like sick sisters

But no worries
You're alive
Kiss the sky
Make a promise
You'll never die

You're alive
Beating heart
Stay alive
Do your part

You'll find a reason
Space, comforting lucidity
Be calm
You're alive
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Comments: 14

kenart22 [2008-07-25 00:58:21 +0000 UTC]

nice

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ARTnoob In reply to kenart22 [2008-07-25 01:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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kenart22 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-25 11:37:43 +0000 UTC]

wellcome feel free to check out my stuff criticisms are wellcome

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xXCinderemoXx [2008-07-24 19:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Really, you should get money for these writings.
They're so perfectly said

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ARTnoob In reply to xXCinderemoXx [2008-07-24 19:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you.
And wouldn't that be amazing if I was paid.
I'd write all the time.


Even moreso than I do already of course.

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xXCinderemoXx In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-24 20:05:59 +0000 UTC]

>w< Same here.
I wish people would just pay me for what I do naturally,
Not force me to have to learn something that I don't want to, then go to work with people I despise, you know?

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ARTnoob In reply to xXCinderemoXx [2008-07-24 20:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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jexxvous08 [2008-07-24 19:02:59 +0000 UTC]

for me?!
oh my god eric, thank you
it's beautiful
thank you so much
i love you
<3
thanks for letting me know you truely care.

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ARTnoob In reply to jexxvous08 [2008-07-24 19:54:09 +0000 UTC]



Anytime.

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jexxvous08 In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-24 19:55:25 +0000 UTC]

i'm speechless
you just make me feel so loved, eric
<3

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CompulsiVeVerbalist [2008-07-24 09:39:04 +0000 UTC]

outstanding....

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Midnight-Sky-Angel [2008-07-24 04:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful<333

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ARTnoob In reply to Midnight-Sky-Angel [2008-07-24 04:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

=]]

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Midnight-Sky-Angel In reply to ARTnoob [2008-07-24 04:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! =3

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