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I have a new theory for writing (and I seem to have one of these every month): if I don't have a clear 'image' in my head of what a chapter should be, it'll turn out weak. Sketch time! I'm pretty sure this practice will last for a grand total of two or three chapters, but I might as well try, right?

Illustrative style: I'm trying to work on linework skills, a la ~Creature13 . Dammit, she is fantastic. I want to be like her when I grow up. Go check out her gallery. Do it.

Introducing Chapter 1, wherein Adam has a very bad day. Like trying to tear off parts of his body bad. He needs a hug.

The *actual* chapter is here: [link] . It's just a Plain Draft, though, so it's not polished. You have been warned.

As always, comments & critiques are appreciated. <33333

Description
I have a new theory for writing (and I seem to have one of these every month): if I don't have a clear 'image' in my head of what a chapter should be, it'll turn out weak. Sketch time! I'm pretty sure this practice will last for a grand total of two or three chapters, but I might as well try, right?

Illustrative style: I'm trying to work on linework skills, a la ~Creature13 . Dammit, she is fantastic. I want to be like her when I grow up. Go check out her gallery. Do it.

Introducing Chapter 1, wherein Adam has a very bad day. Like trying to tear off parts of his body bad. He needs a hug.

The *actual* chapter is here: [link] . It's just a Plain Draft, though, so it's not polished. You have been warned.

As always, comments & critiques are appreciated. <33333